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<p>Dear Chuck,</p>
<p>Thank you for your reply and for considering my suggestions. I
understand the decision of the group, I will be glad to look at
the other ones when it's appropriate. <br>
</p>
<p><br>
</p>
<p>Best regards,</p>
<p><br>
</p>
<p>Peter<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">2016.10.25. 21:02 keltezéssel, Gomes,
Chuck írta:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext">Peter,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext">We did not
have time to cover your proposed edits except for the ones
for the last purpose statement. In that case it was decided
not to make your edits because RDS cannot ‘ensure’
availability of accurate data and members disagree about
‘when it is necessary’.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext">We will
discuss your other proposed edits on the list this week.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><a moz-do-not-send="true"
name="_MailEndCompose"><span style="color:windowtext">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></a></p>
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<b><span style="color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
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<a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>
[<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Kimpian Peter<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, October 25, 2016 11:40 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Lisa Phifer <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:lisa@corecom.com"><lisa@corecom.com></a>;
<a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For your review -
latest version of statement of purpose<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p>Dear All,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p>Please apologise not being able to take part in the call
today, but in the meantime see my suggestions below (and
attached in track cahnegs mode) regarding the text to be
debated for your kind consideration. I can send later on more
detailed explanation if need be and I wish you a successful
call!<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>Thank you!<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%" lang="EN-GB">Draft
Registration Data and Directory Service Statement of Purpose</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%" lang="EN-GB"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%" lang="EN-GB">This
statement is intended to define the purpose(s) of a
potential Registration Directory Service (RDS) for generic
top-level domain (gTLD) names. The statement is grouped
into two categories: 1) Overall Goals for this Statement of
Purpose; 2) Specific Purposes. To ensure that the purposes
are understood in the appropriate context, a list of goals
for each RDS purpose is also provided.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%" lang="EN-GB">Note
that it is important to make a distinction between the
purpose(s) of individual registration data elements versus
the purpose(s) of a RDS, i.e., the system that may collect,
maintain, and provide or deny access to some or all of those
data elements [and services related to them, if any.] </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%" lang="EN-GB"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%" lang="EN-GB">Goals
for each RDS Purpose</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%" lang="EN-GB">i.
Consistency with ICANN’s mission</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="margin-left:35.25pt;text-indent:-35.25pt"><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%" lang="EN-GB">ii.
Consistency with other consensus policies that pertain to
generic top-level domains (gTLDs)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%" lang="EN-GB">iii.
To provide a framework that enables compliance with
applicable laws
</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%" lang="EN-GB">iv.
To help articulate a rationale for a potential RDS (Is this
a real goal?)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%" lang="EN-GB">v.
To communicate purpose(s) of the RDS to registrants (and
others)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%" lang="EN-GB">vi.
To establish relationship between the purpose(s) and the
use(s) of the RDS</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%" lang="EN-GB"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%" lang="EN-GB">Specific
Purposes for Registration Data and Registration Directory
Services</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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</span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%" lang="EN-GB">A
purpose of gTLD registration data is to provide the
necessary information about the lifecycle of a domain name.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:0in;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:0in;margin-left:53.25pt;margin-bottom:.0001pt;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-35.25pt;line-height:normal;mso-list:l0
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</span></span><!--[endif]--><span style="font-size:12.0pt"
lang="EN-GB">A purpose of RDS is to maintain relevant
information about domain contacts<a moz-do-not-send="true"
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title=""><span class="MsoFootnoteReference"><span
class="MsoFootnoteReference"><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-US"
lang="EN-GB">[1]</span></span></span></a>, domain
names and name servers for gTLDs, [based on approved
policy]. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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</span></span><!--[endif]--><span style="font-size:12.0pt"
lang="EN-GB">A purpose of RDS is to identify domain contacts
and enable communication with domain contacts associated
with generic top-level domain names, [based on approved
policy].</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:0in;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:0in;margin-left:53.25pt;margin-bottom:.0001pt;mso-add-space:auto;text-indent:-35.25pt;line-height:normal;mso-list:l0
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</span></span><!--[endif]--><span style="font-size:12.0pt"
lang="EN-GB"> A purpose of gTLD registration data is to
provide a record of domain name registrations.
</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%" lang="EN-GB">A
purpose of RDS is to ensure the availability of accurate
gTLD registration data when it is necessary."</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p>Peter Kimpian<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>Data Protection Unit<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>Council of Europe<o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New
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Phifer írta:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New
Roman",serif">Dear all,<br>
<br>
During Tuesday's WG call, efforts to finalize the draft
statement of purpose will commence with consideration of
proposed purpose #5 "A purpose of RDS is to provide an
authoritative source of accurate data."<br>
<br>
Recognizing that diverse points of view have already been
expressed on this proposed purpose, the leadership team
suggests the following alterative phrasing for WG member
consideration and comment, both on-list today and during
the WG call: #5 "A purpose of RDS is to promote the
availability of accurate gTLD registration data."<br>
<br>
Best regards<br>
Lisa<br>
<br>
At 07:13 AM 10/22/2016, Gomes, Chuck wrote:<br>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New
Roman",serif">Unless I missed them, I haven’t
seen any list discussion on the latest draft RDS
Statement of Purpose. To maximize our efficiency in our
meeting this coming Tuesday, it would be very helpful if
everyone reviewed the redline version that Marika
distributed and shared any comments on the WG list
before the meeting on Tuesday.<br>
<br>
Chuck<br>
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<b>From:</b> <a moz-do-not-send="true"
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[<a moz-do-not-send="true"
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mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Marika Konings<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, October 19, 2016 7:43 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For your review -
latest version of statement of purpose<br>
<br>
Dear All,<br>
<br>
In this week’s WG call for our main agenda item we
focused on the last section of the<b> Draft Registration
Data and Directory Service Statement of Purpose</b>,
‘<u>Specific Purposes for Registration Data and
Registration Directory Service</u>’. Please review
and comment on the 5 purpose statements in that section
with particular attention to the redline changes made on
the call. Please express any concerns you have on the
WG list before our next WG meeting on October 25<sup>th</sup>.
Note that we didn’t finish discussing purpose 5 so we
will continue discussing it on our call next week; in
the meantime, list discussion is strongly encouraged.
<br>
<br>
Best regards,<br>
<br>
Marika<br>
_______________________________________________<br>
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style="font-size:8.0pt"> Contacts related to the domain
name, including those directly related to the domain name
and also those involved in the registration system as
relevant. Further specification may occur at a later stage
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