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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I found what I think are some formatting edits that are needed:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I believe that what are now paragraphs 4.3 and 4.4 should be sub-paragraphs of what is now 4.2.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I also think that what are now paragraphs 4.6 and 4.7 should be sub-paragraphs of what is now 4.5.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">If I am correct on these formatting edits, the attached relined file contains them.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> Jen Wolfe [mailto:jwolfe@wolfedomain.com]
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<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, October 14, 2015 1:14 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Mike Rodenbaugh<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Michele Neylon - Blacknight; Gomes, Chuck; Amr Elsadr; William Drake; Sam Lanfranco; Rudi Vansnick; gnso-review-dt@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [gnso-review-dt] NPOC comments, remarks and statement to the GNSO rec 23.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Attached is the most recent version of the letter. If you could email comments, we can incorporate them into our discussion on Monday morning. Thanks!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:13.5pt"><b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#0E325F;text-transform:uppercase">jennifer c. WOLFE, esq., apr, SSBB</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:13.5pt"><span style="font-size:8.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#0E325F;text-transform:uppercase">Founder & President, wolfe domain, a digital brand strategy advisory firm<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""> Mike Rodenbaugh [<a href="mailto:mike@rodenbaugh.com">mailto:mike@rodenbaugh.com</a>]
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<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, October 13, 2015 2:21 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Jen Wolfe <<a href="mailto:jwolfe@wolfedomain.com">jwolfe@wolfedomain.com</a>><br>
<b>Cc:</b> Michele Neylon - Blacknight <<a href="mailto:michele@blacknight.com">michele@blacknight.com</a>>; Gomes, Chuck <<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com">cgomes@verisign.com</a>>; Amr Elsadr <<a href="mailto:aelsadr@egyptig.org">aelsadr@egyptig.org</a>>;
William Drake <<a href="mailto:wjdrake@gmail.com">wjdrake@gmail.com</a>>; Sam Lanfranco <<a href="mailto:sam@lanfranco.net">sam@lanfranco.net</a>>; Rudi Vansnick <<a href="mailto:rudi.vansnick@isoc.be">rudi.vansnick@isoc.be</a>>;
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<b>Subject:</b> Re: [gnso-review-dt] NPOC comments, remarks and statement to the GNSO rec 23.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I regret that I will not have arrived in Dublin in time for this meeting.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Jen can you please forward the latest iteration of the draft statement to the list. I think the last I have is a redline from you on Sept. 22?<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Tue, Oct 13, 2015 at 11:10 AM, Jen Wolfe <<a href="mailto:jwolfe@wolfedomain.com" target="_blank">jwolfe@wolfedomain.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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This is on our agenda for our meeting next Monday in Dublin and agree that unless there is opposition, we should proceed with sending this to the OEC. If there are any groups that oppose the letter, please provide your feedback so we can respond accordingly.<br>
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We have been given additional time from the OEC to respond on this and the other recommendations so we wanted to ensure that if there was an objection there was time for that to be voiced and that we all had sufficient time to review and respond.<br>
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I look forward to seeing you all in Dublin and to our meeting next Monday at 7 a.m. local time. Thanks again for your continued support of this process!<br>
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JENNIFER C. WOLFE, ESQ., APR, SSBB<br>
FOUNDER & PRESIDENT, WOLFE DOMAIN, A DIGITAL BRAND STRATEGY ADVISORY FIRM<br>
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-----Original Message-----<br>
From: <a href="mailto:owner-gnso-review-dt@icann.org">owner-gnso-review-dt@icann.org</a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:owner-gnso-review-dt@icann.org">owner-gnso-review-dt@icann.org</a>] On Behalf Of Michele Neylon - Blacknight<br>
Sent: Tuesday, October 13, 2015 1:56 PM<br>
To: Gomes, Chuck <<a href="mailto:cgomes@Verisign.com">cgomes@Verisign.com</a>><br>
Cc: Amr Elsadr <<a href="mailto:aelsadr@egyptig.org">aelsadr@egyptig.org</a>>; William Drake <<a href="mailto:wjdrake@gmail.com">wjdrake@gmail.com</a>>; Sam Lanfranco <<a href="mailto:sam@lanfranco.net">sam@lanfranco.net</a>>; Rudi Vansnick <<a href="mailto:rudi.vansnick@isoc.be">rudi.vansnick@isoc.be</a>>;
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Subject: Re: [gnso-review-dt] NPOC comments, remarks and statement to the GNSO rec 23.<br>
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And for the avoidance of doubt, as there appears to be some, the registrar stakeholder group supports the statement as drafted Regards Michele<br>
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Mr. Michele Neylon<br>
Blacknight<br>
<a href="http://www.blacknight.irish" target="_blank">http://www.blacknight.irish</a><br>
Sent from a small shiny object so excuse fat fingers!<br>
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> On 13 Oct 2015, at 18:54, Gomes, Chuck <<a href="mailto:cgomes@Verisign.com">cgomes@Verisign.com</a>> wrote:<br>
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> I feel the same as you Amr; that is why I would like to understand what parts of the statement are problematic.<br>
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> Chuck<br>
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> -----Original Message-----<br>
> From: Amr Elsadr [mailto:<a href="mailto:aelsadr@egyptig.org">aelsadr@egyptig.org</a>]<br>
> Sent: Tuesday, October 13, 2015 1:12 PM<br>
> To: Gomes, Chuck<br>
> Cc: William Drake; Sam Lanfranco; Rudi Vansnick;<br>
> <a href="mailto:gnso-review-dt@icann.org">gnso-review-dt@icann.org</a><br>
> Subject: Re: [gnso-review-dt] NPOC comments, remarks and statement to the GNSO rec 23.<br>
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> Hi,<br>
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> Apologies about revisiting this thread after so much time.<br>
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>> On Oct 1, 2015, at 1:06 PM, Gomes, Chuck <<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com">cgomes@verisign.com</a>> wrote:<br>
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>> Bill,<br>
>><br>
>> I think it is still somewhat up in the error. I suggested in our call yesterday that we could use some time talking about a possible statement but everyone else seemed to want to wait because the OEC gave us more time.<br>
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> Could we possibly put aside some time during the WP session in Dublin to discuss this. It'd be a good opportunity with a number of the WP members being present. I'm having trouble understanding why we haven't been able to achieve consensus on this yet.<br>
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> I'm very willing to have changes made to the statement to accommodate any concerns expressed by NPOC, IPC and ISPCP, however, I don't really see why there is a problem with the current draft. So far, IMHO, the feedback provided by the three constituencies
does not really conflict with anything in there, except for something in the NPOC statement:<br>
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>> On Sep 30, 2015, at 5:31 PM, Rudi Vansnick <<a href="mailto:rudi.vansnick@ISOC.BE">rudi.vansnick@ISOC.BE</a>> wrote:<br>
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> [SNIP]<br>
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>> However, NPOC does not wish to address specific issues within the conclusions and recommendations contained in the Report. To do so would overlook the broader issue of methods used. It also risks offering validation of Report content where validation is
not warranted.<br>
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> I don't really agree with this. It'd be helpful to understand why addressing specific recommendations leads to overlooking broader issues of methodology, or validates the content of the report. Personally, I would expect the working party to have feedback
on both; the methods used in the study in addition to the substantive recommendations. Why does NPOC believe they are mutually exclusive?<br>
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> It'd be great if we can narrow down specific language in the statement where disagreements may exist, so that changes can be suggested. I believe this would be a constructive use of our time in Dublin. I believe it is critically important that the working
party achieves consensus on this topic if it is to provide any helpful feedback to the GNSO Council and the OEC.<br>
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> Thanks.<br>
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> Amr<br>
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