<div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr">Sounds like a run-on sentence to me. </div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr">Zak are you OK with this:</div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr"><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 36pt;text-align:left;text-transform:none;text-indent:0px;letter-spacing:normal;font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:13.33px;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:400;text-decoration:none;word-spacing:0px;white-space:normal"><font color="#b00000">There was general support in the Working Group for publishing this proposal in the Initial Report to seek public comment, with some Working Group members supporting the proposal as drafted. However, some Working Group members expressed opposition, in terms of both substance and implementation, including the proposed remedies and the definitions of “repeat offender” and “high volume cybersquatting”.</font><u></u><u></u></p><span style="text-align:left;color:rgb(34,34,34);text-transform:none;text-indent:0px;letter-spacing:normal;font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:13.33px;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:400;text-decoration:none;word-spacing:0px;display:inline;white-space:normal;float:none;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)">
</span><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0px;text-align:left;color:rgb(34,34,34);text-transform:none;text-indent:0px;letter-spacing:normal;font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:13.33px;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;font-weight:400;text-decoration:none;word-spacing:0px;white-space:normal"><span style="color:black"><u></u> </span></p><b></b><i></i><u></u><sub></sub><sup></sup><strike></strike><br></div><div dir="ltr"><b></b><i></i><u></u><sub></sub><sup></sup><strike></strike><br></div></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div class="gmail_attr" dir="ltr">On Tue, Feb 25, 2020 at 10:53 AM Zak Muscovitch <<a href="mailto:zak@muscovitch.com">zak@muscovitch.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;padding-left:1ex;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span>Sure, Brian.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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Here is what I believe was the original text:<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36pt"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">There was general support in the Working Group for publishing this proposal in the Initial Report to seek public comment. Some Working Group members expressed
practical concerns about implementing the proposal.</span><span><u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span><u></u> <u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span>And here is the proposed revised text:<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36pt"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">While there was general support in the Working Group for publishing this proposal in the Initial Report to seek public comment, and some Working Group members
were in favor of the Individual Proposal as drafted, some Working Group members expressed substantial and serious concerns with both the Individual Proposal’s proposed definition of “repeat offender” and of “high volume cybersquatting”, as well as the proposed
new remedies, and indicated that they were opposed to the Individual Proposal in substance and had practical concerns about implementing the proposal.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span>Zak<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US"> BECKHAM, Brian <<a href="mailto:brian.beckham@wipo.int" target="_blank">brian.beckham@wipo.int</a>>
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<b>Sent:</b> February-25-20 10:42 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Zak Muscovitch <<a href="mailto:zak@muscovitch.com" target="_blank">zak@muscovitch.com</a>>; Julie Hedlund <<a href="mailto:julie.hedlund@icann.org" target="_blank">julie.hedlund@icann.org</a>>; <a href="mailto:gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: Proposed Agenda for RPM Meeting on Wednesday, 26 February 2020 at 18:00-19:30 UTC<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;font-size:10pt">Thanks Zak for this proposal in advance of tomorrow’s meeting.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;font-size:10pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;font-size:10pt">I wonder if you could confirm that I am reading this revised doc onscreen correctly.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;font-size:10pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;font-size:10pt">It seems that you have added an introductory “While” (so instead of: “There was…” it now reads: “While there was…”) and then the clause “and some Working Group
members were in favor of the Individual Proposal as drafted…” <u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;font-size:10pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;font-size:10pt">If that’s right, these seem like unobjectionable clarifications.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;font-size:10pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;font-size:10pt">If not, would you be able to point out the proposed added / deleted text.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;font-size:10pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;font-size:10pt">There also seem to be a few missing connecting words towards the end (“and had”) so that it should read: “…in substance [and had] practical concerns about implementing
the proposal.”<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;font-size:10pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;font-size:10pt">Just checking, and thanks again!<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;font-size:10pt">Brian
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US"> GNSO-RPM-WG <<a href="mailto:gnso-rpm-wg-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-rpm-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Zak Muscovitch<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, February 25, 2020 4:24 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Julie Hedlund <<a href="mailto:julie.hedlund@icann.org" target="_blank">julie.hedlund@icann.org</a>>;
<a href="mailto:gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [GNSO-RPM-WG] Proposed Agenda for RPM Meeting on Wednesday, 26 February 2020 at 18:00-19:30 UTC<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Just FYI, although I was loathe to propose revisions, I took another look at the “Working Group Deliberation” section with regards to Individual Proposal #15, and proposed in the Google Doc some revised language describing my sense of the
WG’s deliberations on this issue, which I think were not entirely reflective of the WG’s deliberation in this instance.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">New proposed wording:<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><u><span style="color:black;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Working Group Deliberation</span></u><span style="color:black;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">: While there was general support in the Working Group for publishing this proposal
in the Initial Report to seek public comment, and some Working Group members were in favor of the Individual Proposal as drafted, some Working Group members expressed substantial and serious concerns with both the Individual Proposal’s proposed definition
of “repeat offender” and of “high volume cybersquatting”, as well as the proposed new remedies and indicated that they were opposed to the Individual Proposal as drafted in substance.
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<p class="MsoNormal">Zak<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US"> GNSO-RPM-WG <<a href="mailto:gnso-rpm-wg-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-rpm-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Julie Hedlund<br>
<b>Sent:</b> February-24-20 1:26 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-rpm-wg@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [GNSO-RPM-WG] Proposed Agenda for RPM Meeting on Wednesday, 26 February 2020 at 18:00-19:30 UTC<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black;font-size:12pt">Dear RPM WG members, </span><span lang="EN-US"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt"> </span><span lang="EN-US"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black;font-size:12pt">Please find the proposed agenda and materials below for the WG meeting on Wednesday,
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt">26 February 2020<span style="color:black"> at
</span>18<span style="color:black">:00-1</span>9<span style="color:black">:30 UTC. </span></span><span lang="EN-US"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt"> </span><span lang="EN-US"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt">As is the GNSO's practice, the document is being circulated for the purpose of ensuring that WG members are comfortable with the format and overall coverage of the recommendations and deliberations.
Please remember that the Initial Report is meant to focus on specific recommendations/proposals, with brief, relevant, accompanying rationale, rather than be a comprehensive record of the WG's deliberations.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><i><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(192,0,0);font-size:12pt">WG members are reminded that comments in the Google docs should be limited only to <u>error corrections</u> that you believe are necessary.</span></i></b><b><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt">Draft Proposed Agenda:<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt">Review Agenda and Updates to Statements of Interest<u></u><u></u></span></li><li class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt">ICANN67 Status<u></u><u></u></span></li><li class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt">Review Revisions from Action Items: TMCH Individual Proposals for which the Working Group is Seeking Input:<a title="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1fh6KnBvqH78Pmo7qUBtR3JyIIvUifJ-2D8hzX9dcJruuA_edit-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=adDIs0WEx_lLwFfrsdovxTYY8GkRHo5ibc8SR3Npdh8&m=pHx2" href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1fh6KnBvqH78Pmo7qUBtR3JyIIvUifJ-2D8hzX9dcJruuA_edit-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=adDIs0WEx_lLwFfrsdovxTYY8GkRHo5ibc8SR3Npdh8&m=pHx2VgLeBUkGzKocmXOoBBhL4753w_2vn37aRHMG6mE&s=wMO-1FtvuW_B3Am7MC4vVwZ03d5TeTRZSNjheGu7Wi8&e=" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fh6KnBvqH78Pmo7qUBtR3JyIIvUifJ-8hzX9dcJruuA/edit?usp=sharing
[docs.google.com]</a><u></u><u></u></span></li><li class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt">Finalize Discussion of Deliberations of the Working Group: URS Individual Proposals:<a title="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1kHBPLtbp6BgqmxZGPHC1Yeciulvvk79niPOuURI8L5U_edit-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=adDIs0WEx_lLwFfrsdovxTYY8GkRHo5ibc8SR3Npdh8&m=nXgVSa" href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1kHBPLtbp6BgqmxZGPHC1Yeciulvvk79niPOuURI8L5U_edit-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=adDIs0WEx_lLwFfrsdovxTYY8GkRHo5ibc8SR3Npdh8&m=nXgVSaMtCITwPJxg7gWJGMiOEAeZJxi27vm2v-ZaGlQ&s=uUfbnYym6VWBHpPINrqXaYW-40q2nYJK4gkMnFiIC78&e=" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kHBPLtbp6BgqmxZGPHC1Yeciulvvk79niPOuURI8L5U/edit?usp=sharing
[docs.google.com]</a> – Start at Proposal #16<u></u><u></u></span></li><li class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt">Review Project Change Request and Revised Work Plan (attached)<u></u><u></u></span></li><li class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt">AOB<u></u><u></u></span></li></ol>
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