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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear Working Group members, <o:p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Please find a public comment analysis document which encapsulates/summarizes the Working Group’s deliberations on the public comments for individual proposals:
</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Pnqor6rHjvowH66GPQG9XI23n8H2mgkbf39-jA4KlFc/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Pnqor6rHjvowH66GPQG9XI23n8H2mgkbf39-jA4KlFc/edit?usp=sharing</a> <span style="color:black">The
updated content for URS Proposals #1, #2, #3, #6, #11, #13, #15, #22, and #26 are on pages 1-12, 14-17.</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Brief introduction:</span></b><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">
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This document is not meant to replace the Working Group’s transcripts/recordings/chat records, which include the full details of each meeting.
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Tue, 23 June session: <span style="color:windowtext"><a href="https://68.schedule.icann.org/meetings/4h27u2A9rBqt8annP">https://68.schedule.icann.org/meetings/4h27u2A9rBqt8annP</a></span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="color:black;margin-top:0in;margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo1">
Thu, 25 June session: <a href="https://community.icann.org/x/9YBIC">https://community.icann.org/x/9YBIC</a><o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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Each proposal section includes its full language (in the yellow box), as well as the rationale provided by the original proponent.
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Under each proposal, there are two sections: <o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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<span style="color:black">1) Public Comment Deliberation Summary: <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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“WG Initial Deliberation Summary” contains the summary of the current round of public comment review by the WG, including any action item/decision by the WG regarding the individual proposal.
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If the WG decides <u>not</u> to preserve the proposal for further deliberation/consensus call, the summary is recorded under “WG Final Deliberation Summary”. <o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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<span style="color:black">2) Final Recommendation Language Derived from the Individual Proposal (If Applicable): this section will include the recommendation language if an individual proposal gains consensus to become a WG final recommendation.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">The update of this document will be ongoing. You are welcome to provide input/feedback and point out any error/mischaracterization/missing content on list.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Best Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Mary, Julie, Ariel
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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