Hi all,<div><br></div><div>I wasn’t on this call when Proposal #6 was discussed by the WG for potential preservation for further WG consideration. </div><div><br></div><div>From my reading of the transcript, and the summary of the public comments as produced/reviewed by staff and the sub-teams, there appears to be a major misunderstanding of the intent of proposal #6. I have a sense that folks think the proposal is seeking to do a lot more than what it is actually seeking to accomplish (perhaps based on the wording of the proposal).</div><div><br></div><div>I am basing my interpretation of this confusion on the following: 1) my personal review of the public comments; 2) the apparent assessment made by Paul McGrady that the proposal should “die on the vine” - based on a rationale that I believe reflects a misunderstanding of the proposal (in contrast, it terms of the CSG constituencies, the proposal is supported by the IPC and BC); and 3) during this last WG meeting, the analysis comments made by Phil as co-chair concerning the analysis of the public comments (which, as I stated above, many of the public comments appear to be based on a misunderstanding of the proposal); and 4) the comments made by Lori along the lines of “let’s put this proposal out it’s misery” (in contrast, the proposal is supported by the IPC and BC, and is based on a previous INTA recommendation).</div><div><br></div><div>As an aside, this experience leaves me with the sense that if a proponent isn’t on a call for an individual proposal discussion, and it’s easy to skip on to the next, it probably a good idea to do so.</div><div><br></div><div>In conclusion, I am expecting/hoping to get a chance to clarify the confusion on this proposal on the next call and for the time being to leave this item open for further review.</div><div><br></div><div>Cheers,</div><div>Claudio</div><div><br></div><div>On Thursday, June 25, 2020, Ariel Liang <<a href="mailto:ariel.liang@icann.org">ariel.liang@icann.org</a>> wrote:</div><div><div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Please find a public comment analysis document which encapsulates/summarizes the Working Group’s deliberations on the public comments for individual proposals:
</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Pnqor6rHjvowH66GPQG9XI23n8H2mgkbf39-jA4KlFc/edit?usp=sharing" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/<wbr>document/d/<wbr>1Pnqor6rHjvowH66GPQG9XI23n8H2m<wbr>gkbf39-jA4KlFc/edit?usp=<wbr>sharing</a> <span style="color:black">The
updated content for URS Proposals #1, #2, #3, #6, #11, #13, #15, #22, and #26 are on pages 1-12, 14-17.</span><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Brief introduction:</span></b><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">
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This document is not meant to replace the Working Group’s transcripts/recordings/chat records, which include the full details of each meeting.
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Tue, 23 June session: <span style="color:windowtext"><a href="https://68.schedule.icann.org/meetings/4h27u2A9rBqt8annP" target="_blank">https://68.schedule.icann.org/<wbr>meetings/4h27u2A9rBqt8annP</a></span><u></u><u></u></li><li style="color:black;margin-top:0in;margin-bottom:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt">
Thu, 25 June session: <a href="https://community.icann.org/x/9YBIC" target="_blank">https://community.icann.org/x/<wbr>9YBIC</a><u></u><u></u></li></ul>
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Each proposal section includes its full language (in the yellow box), as well as the rationale provided by the original proponent.
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“WG Initial Deliberation Summary” contains the summary of the current round of public comment review by the WG, including any action item/decision by the WG regarding the individual proposal.
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<span style="color:black">2) Final Recommendation Language Derived from the Individual Proposal (If Applicable): this section will include the recommendation language if an individual proposal gains consensus to become a WG final recommendation.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">The update of this document will be ongoing. You are welcome to provide input/feedback and point out any error/mischaracterization/<wbr>missing content on list.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Best Regards,<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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