[Gnso-sc-budget] [v0.6] Latest draft of our comment on the FY19 Budget

[Ayden Férdeline]

Dear all,

I have prepared a new draft of our comment on the FY19 Budget. I would appreciate it if you could please review the attached file, and make suggested edits to the new Google Doc:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_nHcEqywxlkoChuUlUorK2BcRrF7mvn-fl-lNJNOrag/edit?usp=sharing

Please note that I have not resolved edits in the [original Google Doc](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ijZ0bKNxjD8tvM3I5TNZGQ71FJF1zkgoydROCFuFETE/edit?usp=sharing); there were so many comments and I did not want to delete any in case we need to refer back to these inputs. Note in particular the new angle that I have taken with CROP; I now raise only the process question, and Martin, please check the suggested edits to the bullet point on the fellowship. I have not removed the bullet point on language services however I have edited it slightly to make it clearer that we are supporting the staff proposal to slimline this spend. Finally, I have removed the bullet on the GDD Summit and NCPH Intersessional.

I hope this version of our comment resolves many of the suggested edits, comments, and concerns that have been raised over the past 48 hours.

If it doesn't, I would appreciate it if you could make some suggested edits directly to the [new Google Doc](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_nHcEqywxlkoChuUlUorK2BcRrF7mvn-fl-lNJNOrag/edit?usp=sharing), or comment on this list. Thank you very much.

Kind regards,

Ayden
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