[Gnso-sc-budget] 32 hours to get our next draft ready

[Ayden Férdeline]

Thank you very much for this, Berry.

I have made some further suggested edits to our document, and also re-arranged the bullet points, re-ordering them so those which concern the Council the most appear first.

Please can everyone review the document today and either make suggested edits directly to the Google Doc in 'suggestion' mode (preferred) or flag concerns on our list.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_nHcEqywxlkoChuUlUorK2BcRrF7mvn-fl-lNJNOrag/edit?usp=sharing

As a friendly reminder we need to get our next draft to the Council mailing list today. Thanks!

Best wishes,

Ayden Férdeline

‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
On 27 February 2018 6:49 AM, Berry Cobb <mail at berrycobb.com> wrote:

> Hi All,
>
> I made comments and suggestions based on the audio of today’s call.  I recommend carefully reading the comments and I will defer to the Chair to take action based on support or opposition of the proposed changes.  I also made some suggested edits, so I invite the SCBO to edit as they see fit.
>
> Please review the document as it stands today in preparation for sending the next draft to the Council.
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> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_nHcEqywxlkoChuUlUorK2BcRrF7mvn-fl-lNJNOrag/edit#
>
> Here’s the link to the AC Recording should you wish to listen to the call again and compare the changes made to this version.
>
> AC recording:  [https://participate.icann.org/p5d6qcjbwjx/](https://participate.icann.org/p5d6qcjbwjx/?OWASP_CSRFTOKEN=9b19dba8ccfaa74a1f84aabd2cbf6b308ed82b52e0357dbfaf02810e749d2e3c)
>
> Thank you.
>
> B
>
> Berry A. Cobb
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> 720.839.5735
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> mail at berrycobb.com
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> @berrycobb
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> From: Gnso-sc-budget [mailto:gnso-sc-budget-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Ayden Férdeline
> Sent: Monday, February 26, 2018 10:32
> To: gnso-sc-budget at icann.org
> Subject: [Gnso-sc-budget] 32 hours to get our next draft ready
>
> Dear all,
>
> Just a friendly reminder that we have 32 hours to go until we need to get the next draft of our comment on the FY19 Budget through to the GNSO Council mailing list.
>
> As a matter of priority could you [please review the Google Doc](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_nHcEqywxlkoChuUlUorK2BcRrF7mvn-fl-lNJNOrag/edit?usp=sharing) and make suggested edits. Berry has kindly offered to listen to the recording of our call to make sure that all relevant comments have been captured in the new draft.
>
> If you could also try to ascertain your stakeholder group / constituency's comfort levels with the contents, and flag any possible areas of concern, that would be appreciated. We are hoping to put forward a new draft of our comment that will be broadly acceptable to everyone.
>
> Thanks for your prompt action.
>
> Best wishes,
>
> Ayden
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