[Gnso-sc-budget] 32 hours to get our next draft ready

[Stephanie Perrin]

and I restricted my comments mostly to grammaticals, excellent job folks!

Stephanie

On 2018-02-27 08:27, Marilyn Cade wrote:
>
> Realizing all are very busy, I just wanted to note that I made a 
> couple of comments/that are indicated as [MSC: then comment]. I am not 
> suggesting that these need to be accepted, but to offer a couple of 
> explanatory thoughts.
>
>
> Congratulations to the work of this very efficient WG!
>
>
>
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> *From:* Gnso-sc-budget <gnso-sc-budget-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of 
> Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com>
> *Sent:* Tuesday, February 27, 2018 6:05 AM
> *To:* Berry Cobb
> *Cc:* gnso-sc-budget at icann.org
> *Subject:* Re: [Gnso-sc-budget] 32 hours to get our next draft ready
> Thank you very much for this, Berry.
>
> I have made some further suggested edits to our document, and also 
> re-arranged the bullet points, re-ordering them so those which concern 
> the Council the most appear first.
>
> Please can everyone review the document today and either make 
> suggested edits directly to the Google Doc in 'suggestion' mode 
> (preferred) or flag concerns on our list.
>
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_nHcEqywxlkoChuUlUorK2BcRrF7mvn-fl-lNJNOrag/edit?usp=sharing 
> <https://nam03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdocs.google.com%2Fdocument%2Fd%2F1_nHcEqywxlkoChuUlUorK2BcRrF7mvn-fl-lNJNOrag%2Fedit%3Fusp%3Dsharing&data=02%7C01%7C%7Ced98ab15bd164e329be208d57dd22c43%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C636553263985654013&sdata=qWw9cz%2Byq1PBZ4J0lXUkZM8t3P5CbQYOr5kmBXFtO%2F0%3D&reserved=0>
>
> As a friendly reminder we need to get our next draft to the Council 
> mailing list today. Thanks!
>
> Best wishes,
>
> Ayden Férdeline
>
>
> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
> On 27 February 2018 6:49 AM, Berry Cobb <mail at berrycobb.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi All,
>>
>>
>> I made comments and suggestions based on the audio of today’s call.  
>> I recommend carefully reading the comments and I will defer to the 
>> Chair to take action based on support or opposition of the proposed 
>> changes.  I also made some suggested edits, so I invite the SCBO to 
>> edit as they see fit.
>>
>>
>> Please review the document as it stands today in preparation for 
>> sending the next draft to the Council.
>>
>>
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_nHcEqywxlkoChuUlUorK2BcRrF7mvn-fl-lNJNOrag/edit# 
>> <https://nam03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdocs.google.com%2Fdocument%2Fd%2F1_nHcEqywxlkoChuUlUorK2BcRrF7mvn-fl-lNJNOrag%2Fedit%23&data=02%7C01%7C%7Ced98ab15bd164e329be208d57dd22c43%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C636553263985654013&sdata=AnUKJmAgehlUNupEVqyu0oP%2FbVN0Q2ddtt5h6blXxzo%3D&reserved=0>
>>
>>
>> Here’s the link to the AC Recording should you wish to listen to the 
>> call again and compare the changes made to this version.
>>
>>
>> *AC recording*: *https://participate.icann.org/p5d6qcjbwjx/* 
>> <https://nam03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fparticipate.icann.org%2Fp5d6qcjbwjx%2F%3FOWASP_CSRFTOKEN%3D9b19dba8ccfaa74a1f84aabd2cbf6b308ed82b52e0357dbfaf02810e749d2e3c&data=02%7C01%7C%7Ced98ab15bd164e329be208d57dd22c43%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C636553263985654013&sdata=2LPw0gEuQfd97lu1S7IWneSz431g5HC04MKMaO%2F8LI4%3D&reserved=0>
>>
>>
>> Thank you.
>>
>>
>> B
>>
>>
>> Berry A. Cobb
>>
>> 720.839.5735
>>
>> mail at berrycobb.com <mailto:mail at berrycobb.com>
>>
>> @berrycobb
>>
>>
>> *From:*Gnso-sc-budget [mailto:gnso-sc-budget-bounces at icann.org] *On 
>> Behalf Of *Ayden Férdeline
>> *Sent:* Monday, February 26, 2018 10:32
>> *To:* gnso-sc-budget at icann.org
>> *Subject:* [Gnso-sc-budget] 32 hours to get our next draft ready
>>
>>
>> Dear all,
>>
>>
>> Just a friendly reminder that we have 32 hours to go until we need to 
>> get the next draft of our comment on the FY19 Budget through to the 
>> GNSO Council mailing list.
>>
>>
>> As a matter of priority could you please review the Google Doc 
>> <https://nam03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdocs.google.com%2Fdocument%2Fd%2F1_nHcEqywxlkoChuUlUorK2BcRrF7mvn-fl-lNJNOrag%2Fedit%3Fusp%3Dsharing&data=02%7C01%7C%7Ced98ab15bd164e329be208d57dd22c43%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C636553263985654013&sdata=qWw9cz%2Byq1PBZ4J0lXUkZM8t3P5CbQYOr5kmBXFtO%2F0%3D&reserved=0> 
>> and make suggested edits. Berry has kindly offered to listen to the 
>> recording of our call to make sure that all relevant comments have 
>> been captured in the new draft.
>>
>>
>> If you could also try to ascertain your stakeholder group / 
>> constituency's comfort levels with the contents, and flag any 
>> possible areas of concern, that would be appreciated. We are hoping 
>> to put forward a new draft of our comment that will be broadly 
>> acceptable to everyone.
>>
>>
>> Thanks for your prompt action.
>>
>>
>> Best wishes,
>>
>>
>> Ayden
>>
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