[Gnso-sc-budget] [v.0.9.2] Please review urgently - draft Council comment on the Budget

Ayden Férdeline icann at ferdeline.com
Tue Mar 6 15:47:18 UTC 2018


Dear all,

Just a friendly reminder that we need to send our comment on the FY19 Budget through to the Council mailing list today for evaluation and review.

Unless I hear any objections, I plan to send through the attached file (with track changes marked to 'accepted') in 3 hours time at 17:30 UTC.

I did a quick fact check and couldn't find where the $8.1 million figure originated from re: increase in personnel costs. Document #2, page 9 says $7.3 million, so I've adjusted this now - but I would appreciate it if someone could please double check this.

The other changes I made were largely grammatical, replacing "implantation" on page 3 with "implementation", and reverting one sentence regarding GSE to a previous draft of our comment ([please see my email here](https://mm.icann.org/pipermail/gnso-sc-budget/2018-March/000261.html)).

I have also flagged one edit on page 2, second bullet point of our specific comments. "SAs/Cs" was changed to "SGs/Cs". However "SGs/Cs" was the original language, and I believe the change to "SOs/Cs" originated from Marilyn. Marilyn could you please review this and kindly advise if this change to "SOs/Cs" was intentional? Thank you.

All - as a matter of priority could you please review the attached comment one last time and indicate if you have any concerns? Thank you very much.

Best wishes,

Ayden Férdeline
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