[Gnso-sc-budget] [v. 0.5] Draft Report

[philippe.fouquart at orange.com]

Thanks Ayden.

Thanks also to staff, for fixing the attendance tool for the "subject matter experts", I think Marilyn's point was important, it would have been misleading otherwise.
 
As it stands, I think the report gives an accurate depiction of what can reasonably achieved and what would appear more challenging or what we struggled with. I'm not that fond of explicitly mentioning a constituency in the body of a document ("one participant" as opposed to "naming names"), doing that in an annex is certainly ok, but if people think that's added value, I'm fine.

Regards,
Philippe 

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From: Gnso-sc-budget [mailto:gnso-sc-budget-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Ayden Férdeline
Sent: Friday, September 14, 2018 11:05 AM
To: gnso-sc-budget at icann.org
Subject: Re: [Gnso-sc-budget] [v. 0.5] Draft Report

Hi all,

Just a friendly reminder that the deadline for comments on our draft report is today at 19:00 UTC.

After this time, I will work to resolve any edits or comments that have been received (if any). If no further comments are received, the After Action Report will be submitted to the GNSO Council. Thanks.

Best wishes,

Ayden Férdeline

> On 12 Sep 2018, at 00:09, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> wrote:
> 
> Dear all,
> 
> Please find attached the latest draft of our After Action Report. 
> 
> I have made a number of changes in track changes.
> 
> These are not only stylistic edits, they are also edits to the substance of the report, so I ask that you please review it and advise if you have any concerns.
> 
> Please can you advise by Friday 19:00 UTC if you have any concerns.
> 
> Thank you,
> 
> Ayden Férdeline
> 
> <gnso-SCBO-after-action-report-v0.5 - AFF.docx>


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