[Gnso-sc-budget] [new draft] After Action Report

[Marilyn Cade]

Thanks very much, Ayden, and colleagues.


Marilyn Cade


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From: Gnso-sc-budget <gnso-sc-budget-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com>
Sent: Friday, September 14, 2018 5:05 PM
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Subject: [Gnso-sc-budget] [new draft] After Action Report

Dear all,

Please find attached version 6 of our After Action Report. I have attached a redlined version, as well as a clean version in Word and PDF formats.

The following changes have been made to the document from the previous draft that you have reviewed:


  *   In Section 1.4 (Questions), responding Stakeholder Groups and Constituencies are no longer named, and are referred to as “respondents.”
  *   In 1.4 (6) I deleted the final sentence per a request from the BC this evening.
  *   In 1.4 (9) I have replaced the language with the suggested text from the BC, though I made a few minor stylistic edits for consistency with the rest of our document.
  *   I updated the date of the document and the table of contents.

Please can you advise if you have any concerns regarding this draft. In the absence of feedback received to our list by Sunday, 16 September at 16:00 UTC, a clean version of our report will be sent to the GNSO Council for its review.

Thank you.

Best wishes,

Ayden Férdeline

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