[Gnso-sc-budget] [new draft] After Action Report

[Ayden Férdeline]

Dear all,

I will submit our After Action Report to the GNSO Council mailing list today so that its contents can be reviewed and discussed ahead of the GNSO Council’s meeting on 27 September.

Best wishes,

Ayden Férdeline

> On 15 Sep 2018, at 00:40, Marilyn Cade <marilynscade at hotmail.com> wrote:
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> Thanks very much, Ayden, and colleagues.
>
> Marilyn Cade
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> From: Gnso-sc-budget <gnso-sc-budget-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com>
> Sent: Friday, September 14, 2018 5:05 PM
> To: gnso-sc-budget at icann.org
> Subject: [Gnso-sc-budget] [new draft] After Action Report
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> Dear all,
>
> Please find attached version 6 of our After Action Report. I have attached a redlined version, as well as a clean version in Word and PDF formats.
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> The following changes have been made to the document from the previous draft that you have reviewed:
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> - In Section 1.4 (Questions), responding Stakeholder Groups and Constituencies are no longer named, and are referred to as “respondents.”
> - In 1.4 (6) I deleted the final sentence per a request from the BC this evening.
> - In 1.4 (9) I have replaced the language with the suggested text from the BC, though I made a few minor stylistic edits for consistency with the rest of our document.
> - I updated the date of the document and the table of contents.
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> Please can you advise if you have any concerns regarding this draft. In the absence of feedback received to our list by Sunday, 16 September at 16:00 UTC, a clean version of our report will be sent to the GNSO Council for its review.
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> Thank you.
>
> Best wishes,
>
> Ayden Férdeline
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