[Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Further updated working principles for your review
Olivier Kouami
olivierkouami at gmail.com
Tue Jan 21 00:27:23 UTC 2014
+1 at Nic.
Cheers !
-Olevie-
2014/1/20 Gomes, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com>
> Thanks Nic. That does make more sense to me.
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> All – please comment on this proposed structure (outline).
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> Chuck
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> *From:* Nic Steinbach [mailto:nic at name.com]
> *Sent:* Monday, January 20, 2014 5:15 PM
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> *To:* Gomes, Chuck
> *Cc:* Mary Wong; gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org
> *Subject:* Re: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Further updated working
> principles for your review
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> Ah, I understand now. I wasn't focused on the structure and headings of
> the first page since we went over it on the last call. Sorry about that.
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> Eventually I don't think there will be two more sets of principles under
> the overarching. I would propose that there would only be "Overarching" and
> "Principles" on the final document.
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> At this time there has only been discussion (consensus?) on the three
> principle bullet points on the first page. The other principles have
> received some comments via email, but haven't been discussed.
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> I slightly re-worded the current headings to reflect this proposal and our
> current progress. Current document has this structure:
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> A. Overarching Principle
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> B. Principles
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> I. Discussed Principles
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> II. Additional Proposed Principles
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> 1.) Proposed Principles Relating to Policy
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> a. Policy Standards
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> b. Policy and the Community
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> 2.) Proposed Principles Relating to Implementation
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> a. Implementation Standards
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> b. Limitations of Implementation
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> 3.) Proposed Principles Relating to ICANN Staff
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> a. ICANN Staff Involvement
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> b. ICANN Staff Limitations
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> C. Explanatory Notes to Principles
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> I think after we evaluate/incorporate/eliminate/discuss the "Additional
> Proposed Principles" we can consolidate and sort "Principles" based on what
> we end up with. I think that it will most likely be reasonable to sort
> principles based on categories similar to the "Additional Proposed
> Principles," but I don't think we should set those in stone until we get
> through them.
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> I hope that makes slightly more sense.
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> On Mon, Jan 20, 2014 at 2:32 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com> wrote:
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> Thanks for clarifying Nic. So, in the version you sent, does the section
> titled “I. General Principles” go with the Overarching Principle?
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> Chuck
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> *From:* Nic Steinbach [mailto:nic at name.com]
> *Sent:* Monday, January 20, 2014 3:50 PM
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> *To:* Gomes, Chuck
> *Cc:* Mary Wong; gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org
> *Subject:* Re: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Further updated working
> principles for your review
>
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> Hi Chuck,
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> There shouldn't be any distinction between general and additional
> principles. More like:
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> A. Overarching Principle
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> B. Additional Proposed Principles
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> a. Policy Principles
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> b. Implementation Principles
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> c. Principles relating to ICANN staff
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> C. Explanatory Notes to the General Principle
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> Sorry if that wasn't clear.
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> Best,
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> Nic
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> On Mon, Jan 20, 2014 at 1:42 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com> wrote:
>
> Thank you very much Nic. I would like as many on the sub-team who can to
> respond to this before our meeting this next Thursday. In doing so, I
> request that you comment in two ways:
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> 1. The overall structure (outline)
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> 2. Specific comments in the document in the comments spaces
> provided.
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> If you do not have time to do both, please comment on 1.
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>
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> Regarding 1, I believe that the document as NIC revised it follows the
> following outline (Nic – please correct this if it is not correct.):
>
> A. Overarching Principle
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> B. General Principles
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> a. Policy Principles
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> b. Implementation Principles
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> c. Principles relating to ICANN staff
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> C. Additional Principles
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> D. Explanatory Notes to the General Principles
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>
>
> Chuck
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> *From:* Nic Steinbach [mailto:nic at name.com]
> *Sent:* Monday, January 20, 2014 3:13 PM
> *To:* Gomes, Chuck
> *Cc:* Mary Wong; gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org
> *Subject:* Re: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Further updated working
> principles for your review
>
>
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> Hello All,
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> I apologize for the delay on this.
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> Attached is my re-organization of the additional principles. These
> principles have been regrouped into three major categories each with
> several sub categories.
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> I also flagged concepts that are reflected in the additional principles,
> but are not explicitly called out in the overarching principle. While the
> general spirit of many of the additional principles is reflected in the
> current overarching principle there are specific differences or additions
> that may bear additional consideration. I did my best to be objective here,
> but please feel free to add, delete, comment on these flagged concepts.
>
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> I didn't make any changes to either the overarching principle or the last
> section with notes on that principle. I attempted to port all of the
> comments - please let me know if you think a comment made by you or someone
> else in the group got lost.
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> I hope that this document is useful and am happy to implement
> modifications or additional suggestions.
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> Best,
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>
>
> Nic
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> On Thu, Jan 16, 2014 at 5:34 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com> wrote:
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> Thank you very much Mary.
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>
>
> All – Note that Nic plans to provide his revision of this document several
> days before our next call, which will be next Thursday at the same time as
> today. Please plan on reviewing, and if possible commenting, on that
> document prior to our call next week.
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> Thanks, Chuck
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>
> *From:* gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl-bounces at icann.org [mailto:
> gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl-bounces at icann.org] *On Behalf Of *Mary Wong
> *Sent:* Thursday, January 16, 2014 7:01 PM
> *Cc:* gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org
> *Subject:* [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Further updated working principles
> for your review
>
>
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> Hello everyone,
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>
>
> As discussed on the sub-team call earlier today, I've updated the Working
> Principles document to reflect: (1) the wording change to the definition of
> "multi stakeholder model", per Michael's input from the Definitions
> sub-team; (2) the reworked bullet points on the General Principles that
> reflect the basis of Policy and Implementation processes in ICANN's
> multi-stakeholder model; (3) removal of several Additional Principles that
> the group agreed were already incorporated into the three General
> Principles; and (4) a new "Section III" for the group to consider including
> as Explanatory Notes to the three General Principles (if needed).
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>
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> Please note that I've taken the liberty of deleting earlier comments in
> the previous version that were dealt with by the group today, and moved
> some remaining comments from the Additional Principles section to the new
> Section III as they do not seem to encapsulate additional principles but
> rather expound on specific aspects of the General Principles. Where I've
> added language, I've highlighted that in yellow in this new version.
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>
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> Should you wish to ensure that I have not inadvertently lost some comments
> or suggestions from the previous version, I attach that as well for your
> convenience.
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> For the benefit of those sub team members who were not able to be on the
> call today, Nic Steinbach has kindly offered to further review and revise
> this updated document framework in time for the group's next meeting on
> Thursday 23 January.
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> Thanks and cheers,
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> Mary
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> Mary Wong
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> Senior Policy Director
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> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
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> Telephone: +1 603 574 4892
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> Email: mary.wong at icann.org
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> * One World. One Internet. *
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> *From: *<Gomes>, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com>
> *Date: *Tuesday, January 14, 2014 2:25 PM
> *To: *Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org>, Nic Steinbach <
> nic at name.com>
> *Cc: *"gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org" <
> gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org>
> *Subject: *Re: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Updated working principles for
> your review
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> While encouraging sub-team members to comment on any items in this
> document, I especially want to ask all of you to do one more review of the
> overarching principle at the beginning. We spent most of our call last
> week working on the wording of that and I would like to move past that in
> our call this week. If you have any more comments or edits about the
> overarching principle, please communicate them before our call on Thursday
> if at all possible. I would like to spend no more than 5 or 10 minutes on
> the overarching principle at the beginning of our call this week and move
> on to the other draft principles.
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> Chuck
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> *From:* Marika Konings [mailto:marika.konings at icann.org<marika.konings at icann.org>]
>
> *Sent:* Saturday, January 11, 2014 5:59 AM
> *To:* Nic Steinbach; Gomes, Chuck
> *Cc:* gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org
> *Subject:* Re: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Updated working principles for
> your review
>
>
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> Dear All,
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> To facilitate your review, I've integrated Nic's comment into the document
> as well as those sent by Avri earlier this week (see attached). Please feel
> free to add any further comments to this version of the document.
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>
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> Thanks,
>
>
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> Marika
>
>
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> *From: *Nic Steinbach <nic at name.com>
> *Date: *Friday 10 January 2014 19:08
> *To: *Chuck Gomes <cgomes at verisign.com>
> *Cc: *Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org>, "
> gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org" <gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org>
> *Subject: *Re: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Updated working principles for
> your review
>
>
>
> Hello All,
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>
>
> In the interest of kicking off an online discussion prior to next week's
> call, I have added a few more comments to this doc. Focused on the
> principles we hadn't gotten to in a meeting yet.
>
>
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> Have a nice weekend,
>
>
>
> Nic
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> On Fri, Jan 10, 2014 at 8:53 AM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com> wrote:
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> Thanks a lot Marika.
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>
>
> When you or Mary have time, I think it would be helpful if the comments
> that Avri sent yesterday were added to this document. I believe they dealt
> with principles after the overarching principle so they did not come up in
> yesterday’s discussions but I don’t want to lose those going forward.
>
>
>
> Chuck
>
>
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> *From:*gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl-bounces at icann.org [mailto:
> gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl-bounces at icann.org] *On Behalf Of *Marika Konings
> *Sent:* Friday, January 10, 2014 3:15 AM
> *To:* gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org
> *Subject:* [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Updated working principles for
> your review
>
>
>
> Dear All,
>
>
>
> Please find attached for your review the latest version of the working
> principles document as updated during our meeting yesterday. I also removed
> the comments that I believe were addressed as part of yesterday's
> conversation.
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>
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> Please share any additional comments and/or edits you have with the
> mailing list ahead of our next meeting which has been scheduled for *Thursday
> 16 January at 21.00 UTC for 90 minutes*.
>
>
>
> Best regards,
>
>
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> Marika
>
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