[ICANN-CSC] Charter Review Report comments

[Jay Daley]

Hi Elaine

Some minor changes suggested in the attached version, with tracked changes.  The only substantive one is to add more explanation to the travel funding element.

kind regards
Jay

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> On 30/05/2018, at 3:31 AM, Elaine Pruis <elainepruis at gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Hello,
> Please find attached the suggested comments on the Charter Review Team report and Charter revisions. We'll submit these comments to ICANN on Thursday. Please send any edits or additions using Track Changes, within the next 48 hours.
> Thanks
> Elaine
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