[ICANN-CSC] Agenda: CSC November Meeting 25, Friday, 16 November, 19:00-21:00 UTC

[Brett Carr]

In the “Procedure for Amending the IANA naming SLA”

I found this sentence:

“Once the final change recommendation is agreed to by the CSC, PTI, and ICANN*, PTI and/or ICANN will publicly post on the CSC webpage, the modified Procedure for Amending the Process for Amending the IANA Naming Service Level Agreement and such revised Process will become effective”

A little difficult to parse:

My suggested improvement:

Once the final change recommendation is agreed to by the CSC, PTI, and ICANN*. PTI and/or ICANN will publicly post on the CSC webpage, the modified Procedure for Amending the Process related to the IANA Naming Service Level Agreement. The revised Process will become effective.



Brett



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Brett Carr
Manager DNS and Network Engineering
Nominet UK



From: ICANN-CSC <icann-csc-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Maria Otanes <maria.otanes at icann.org>
Date: Monday, 12 November 2018 at 22:35
To: "ICANN-CSC at icann.org" <icann-csc at icann.org>
Subject: Re: [ICANN-CSC] Agenda: CSC November Meeting 25, Friday, 16 November, 19:00-21:00 UTC

Dear CSC,

Please find the attached documents from the GDD team on SLA Change Mechanism.

Inventory List:
1.      Overview Materials: document provides some visuals for document requirements, the process flow for amending the IANA Naming Functions Contract: Annex A, a text based project plan and the same plan but in a more visual calendar format.

2.      SLA Amendment Process_Draft for Consideration: this is the latest process version for how to amend a SLA. Please note we have now shown how the original table format which created 4 categories of SLA change types is fully captured in the process.

3.      Procedure for Modifying the Process for Amending the IANA Naming Service Level Agreements: latest version for a mechanism allowing us to change the SLA Amendment Process.

The Wiki Space has also been updated with the latest documents: https://community.icann.org/x/_QXVBQ

Thank you,
Ria

From: ICANN-CSC <icann-csc-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Maria Otanes <maria.otanes at icann.org>
Date: Friday, November 9, 2018 at 4:15 PM
To: "ICANN-CSC at icann.org" <icann-csc at icann.org>
Subject: [ICANN-CSC] Agenda: CSC November Meeting 25, Friday, 16 November, 19:00-21:00 UTC

Dear CSC,

Please find the agenda for the November CSC meeting in the Wiki space below and attached.

The next call will be held next Friday, 16 November, at 19:00-21:00 UTC.

The Wiki agenda page can be found here: https://community.icann.org/x/_QXVBQ

Have a great weekend,
Ria

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Ria Otanes
Secretariat Operations Coordinator
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)

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