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<p class="MsoNormal">In the “Procedure for Amending the IANA naming SLA”<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">I found this sentence:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">“Once the final change recommendation is agreed to by the CSC, PTI, and ICANN*, PTI and/or ICANN will publicly post on the CSC webpage, the modified Procedure for Amending the Process for Amending the IANA Naming Service Level Agreement
and such revised Process will become effective”<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">A little difficult to parse:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">My suggested improvement:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Once the final change recommendation is agreed to by the CSC, PTI, and ICANN*. PTI and/or ICANN will publicly post on the CSC webpage, the modified Procedure for Amending the Process related to the IANA Naming Service Level Agreement. The
revised Process will become effective.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Brett<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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--<br>
Brett Carr<br>
Manager DNS and Network Engineering<br>
Nominet UK<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><b><span style="color:black">From:
</span></b><span style="color:black">ICANN-CSC <icann-csc-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org><br>
<b>Date: </b>Monday, 12 November 2018 at 22:35<br>
<b>To: </b>"ICANN-CSC@icann.org" <icann-csc@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [ICANN-CSC] Agenda: CSC November Meeting 25, Friday, 16 November, 19:00-21:00 UTC<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear CSC,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Please find the attached documents from the GDD team on SLA Change Mechanism.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Inventory List:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l5 level1 lfo3">
<![if !supportLists]><span style="color:black"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">1.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Overview Materials: document provides some visuals for document requirements, the process flow for amending the IANA Naming Functions Contract: Annex A, a text based project plan and
the same plan but in a more visual calendar format.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo6">
<![if !supportLists]><span style="color:black"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">2.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">SLA Amendment Process_Draft for Consideration: this is the latest process version for how to amend a SLA. Please note we have now shown how the original table format which created 4 categories
of SLA change types is fully captured in the process.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo9">
<![if !supportLists]><span style="color:black"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">3.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Procedure for Modifying the Process for Amending the IANA Naming Service Level Agreements: latest version for a mechanism allowing us to change the SLA Amendment Process.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">The Wiki Space has also been updated with the latest documents:
<a href="https://community.icann.org/x/_QXVBQ">https://community.icann.org/x/_QXVBQ</a></span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thank you,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Ria</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><b><span style="color:black">From:
</span></b><span style="color:black">ICANN-CSC <icann-csc-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org><br>
<b>Date: </b>Friday, November 9, 2018 at 4:15 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>"ICANN-CSC@icann.org" <icann-csc@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[ICANN-CSC] Agenda: CSC November Meeting 25, Friday, 16 November, 19:00-21:00 UTC</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear CSC,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Please find the agenda for the November CSC meeting in the Wiki space below and attached.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">The next call will be held next Friday, 16 November, at 19:00-21:00 UTC.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">The Wiki agenda page can be found here:
<a href="https://community.icann.org/x/_QXVBQ">https://community.icann.org/x/_QXVBQ</a></span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Have a great weekend,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Ria</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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