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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Thank you Brett,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>I’m tracking edits and comments for the CSC meeting and will add this edit.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Amy Creamer<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>GDD Strategic Project Manager<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Global Domains Division (GDD)<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Direct Line: +1 310 578 8910<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Mobile: +1 424 537 8917<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Email: <a href="mailto:Amy.creamer@icann.org"><span style='color:#0563C1'>amy.creamer@icann.org</span></a><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Skype: amy_creamer<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>www.icann.org<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:11.0pt'> ICANN-CSC <icann-csc-bounces@icann.org> <b>On Behalf Of </b>Brett Carr<br><b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, November 14, 2018 8:52 AM<br><b>To:</b> Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org>; ICANN-CSC@icann.org<br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [ICANN-CSC] Agenda: CSC November Meeting 25, Friday, 16 November, 19:00-21:00 UTC<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB>In the “Procedure for Amending the IANA naming SLA”<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB>I found this sentence:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB>“Once the final change recommendation is agreed to by the CSC, PTI, and ICANN*, PTI and/or ICANN will publicly post on the CSC webpage, the modified Procedure for Amending the Process for Amending the IANA Naming Service Level Agreement and such revised Process will become effective”<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'>A little difficult to parse:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'>My suggested improvement:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB>Once the final change recommendation is agreed to by the CSC, PTI, and ICANN*. PTI and/or ICANN will publicly post on the CSC webpage, the modified Procedure for Amending the Process related to the IANA Naming Service Level Agreement. The revised Process will become effective.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'>Brett<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'><br>--<br>Brett Carr<br>Manager DNS and Network Engineering<br>Nominet UK<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><b><span lang=EN-GB style='color:black'>From: </span></b><span lang=EN-GB style='color:black'>ICANN-CSC <<a href="mailto:icann-csc-bounces@icann.org">icann-csc-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of Maria Otanes <<a href="mailto:maria.otanes@icann.org">maria.otanes@icann.org</a>><br><b>Date: </b>Monday, 12 November 2018 at 22:35<br><b>To: </b>"<a href="mailto:ICANN-CSC@icann.org">ICANN-CSC@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:icann-csc@icann.org">icann-csc@icann.org</a>><br><b>Subject: </b>Re: [ICANN-CSC] Agenda: CSC November Meeting 25, Friday, 16 November, 19:00-21:00 UTC<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'>Dear CSC,</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'>Please find the attached documents from the GDD team on SLA Change Mechanism.</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'>Inventory List:</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:1.0in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span lang=EN-GB style='color:black'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>1.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt;color:black'>Overview Materials: document provides some visuals for document requirements, the process flow for amending the IANA Naming Functions Contract: Annex A, a text based project plan and the same plan but in a more visual calendar format.</span><span lang=EN-GB style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt;color:black'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:1.0in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo4'><![if !supportLists]><span lang=EN-GB style='color:black'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>2.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt;color:black'>SLA Amendment Process_Draft for Consideration: this is the latest process version for how to amend a SLA. Please note we have now shown how the original table format which created 4 categories of SLA change types is fully captured in the process.</span><span lang=EN-GB style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt;color:black'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:1.0in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo6'><![if !supportLists]><span lang=EN-GB style='color:black'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>3.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt;color:black'>Procedure for Modifying the Process for Amending the IANA Naming Service Level Agreements: latest version for a mechanism allowing us to change the SLA Amendment Process.</span><span lang=EN-GB style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'>The Wiki Space has also been updated with the latest documents: <a href="https://community.icann.org/x/_QXVBQ">https://community.icann.org/x/_QXVBQ</a></span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'>Thank you,</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'>Ria</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><b><span lang=EN-GB style='color:black'>From: </span></b><span lang=EN-GB style='color:black'>ICANN-CSC <<a href="mailto:icann-csc-bounces@icann.org">icann-csc-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of Maria Otanes <<a href="mailto:maria.otanes@icann.org">maria.otanes@icann.org</a>><br><b>Date: </b>Friday, November 9, 2018 at 4:15 PM<br><b>To: </b>"<a href="mailto:ICANN-CSC@icann.org">ICANN-CSC@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:icann-csc@icann.org">icann-csc@icann.org</a>><br><b>Subject: </b>[ICANN-CSC] Agenda: CSC November Meeting 25, Friday, 16 November, 19:00-21:00 UTC</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'>Dear CSC,</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'>Please find the agenda for the November CSC meeting in the Wiki space below and attached.</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'>The next call will be held next Friday, 16 November, at 19:00-21:00 UTC.</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'>The Wiki agenda page can be found here: <a href="https://community.icann.org/x/_QXVBQ">https://community.icann.org/x/_QXVBQ</a></span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'>Have a great weekend,</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'>Ria</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:11.0pt'> </span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:4.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:gray;background:white'>_______________________________________________________________________________________________</span><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><b><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif'>Ria Otanes</span></b><span 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