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--></style></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>Hi Allan,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>Thanks for your feedback on the document. I will refrain from making any changes until we have our discussion on Wednesday given that the meeting is in two days.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>I agree we need to decide what documents we want to be consistent with and let’s see how the discussion goes on Wednesday.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>For your question about the designation of ‘Validation of Reviews after each submission’, what we are talking about here is changing the definition of what is measured. The original SLA measured the full time staff spent on validation and reviews. In this proposed change, we are suggesting that we focus on time spent on this activity after each submission. I think that you are right though, that is more accurately characterized as metrics to focus on under this SLA category.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal>Naela <o:p></o:p></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><b><span style='font-size:12.0pt;color:black'>From: </span></b><span style='font-size:12.0pt;color:black'>Allan MacGillivray <allan.macgillivray@cira.ca><br><b>Date: </b>Friday, June 7, 2019 at 12:24 PM<br><b>To: </b>Kim Davies <kim.davies@iana.org><br><b>Cc: </b>Naela Sarras <naela.sarras@iana.org>, Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org>, "ICANN-CSC@icann.org" <ICANN-CSC@icann.org><br><b>Subject: </b>RE: [ICANN-CSC] [EXT] Re: CSC Meeting 30: Recording, Notes, & Chat<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'>Kim - it’s just a question of which documents one wants to be consistent with. <o:p></o:p></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:0in;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:12.0pt;margin-left:.5in'>Allan<br><br><br>Sent with BlackBerry Work<br>(www.blackberry.com)<o:p></o:p></p></div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:5.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><b><span style='font-size:10.5pt'>From: </span></b><span style='font-size:10.5pt'>Kim Davies <<a href="mailto:kim.davies@iana.org">kim.davies@iana.org</a>><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><b><span style='font-size:10.5pt'>Date: </span></b><span style='font-size:10.5pt'>Friday, Jun 07, 2019, 1:43 PM<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><b><span style='font-size:10.5pt'>To: </span></b><span style='font-size:10.5pt'>Allan MacGillivray <<a href="mailto:allan.macgillivray@cira.ca">allan.macgillivray@cira.ca</a>><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><b><span style='font-size:10.5pt'>Cc: </span></b><span style='font-size:10.5pt'>Naela Sarras <<a href="mailto:naela.sarras@iana.org">naela.sarras@iana.org</a>>, Maria Otanes <<a href="mailto:maria.otanes@icann.org">maria.otanes@icann.org</a>>, ICANN-CSC@icann.org <<a href="mailto:ICANN-CSC@icann.org">ICANN-CSC@icann.org</a>><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><b><span style='font-size:10.5pt'>Subject: </span></b><span style='font-size:10.5pt'>Re: [ICANN-CSC] [EXT] Re: CSC Meeting 30: Recording, Notes, & Chat<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:0in;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:12.0pt;margin-left:.5in'><span style='font-size:10.0pt'>Hi Allan,<br><br>Quoting Allan MacGillivray on Friday June 07, 2019:<br>> But one very general one is that the ccTLD community is very, very particular about terminology and for them, the reference document is the Final Report of the Framework of Interpretation Working Group’. I recommend that you stick to the terminology therein which refers to ccTLD ‘delegations and transfers’, rather than ‘creations/transfers’. I think that we can avoid some comments if Bart were to closely review the first paragraph in the background section to ensure that PTI is not seen to be deviating from establish orthodoxy.<br><br>I don't disagree with the sentiment, but I would note that terminology<br>is not something new that is being introduced with this document - the<br>lineage dates at least to the community's transition proposal that<br>informed the SLAs. The "SLE Working Group Report on Service Level<br>Expectation for IANA Root Zone Management (Post-Transition)", from what<br>was known as Design Team A, reads:<br><br> Category III (Creating or Transferring a gTLD)—Requests to<br> create (“delegate”) or transfer (“redelegate” or “assign”) a generic<br> top-level domain. These changes require additional processing by IANA<br> to ensure policy and contractual requirements are met associated<br> with a change of control for the TLD. While the key processing is<br> performed elsewhere within ICANN, the IANA processing is significant<br> and therefore distinguishes this type of request from a routine change<br> request.<br> <br> Category IV (Creating or Transferring a ccTLD)—Requests to<br> create or transfer a country-code top-level domain. These changes<br> require additional processing by IANA to ensure policy requirements are<br> met. This processing is performed by IANA staff, and includes performing<br> additional analysis on the change request, producing a report, and<br> having that report reviewed externally(including verification that all<br> existing registration data has been successfully transferred from the<br> old to new Registry operator). This processing is significant, and<br> is normally substantially longer than a routine change request, and<br> therefore should be distinguished.<br><br>kim<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></body></html>