[Idngwg] [Ext] Re: Updated document based on current discussions

[Sarmad Hussain]

Dear All,

Please find attached an updated version 2.3.  This still includes Dennis’ comments (of which two are resolved as noted in the updated version).  In addition, I have incorporated changes discussed in the previous call, changing “Implementation Notes” to “Additional Notes”, some additional edits (in redline) and added references from relevant guidelines to Guideline 19 and Additional Notes section.

Regards,
Sarmad

From: Tan Tanaka, Dennis [mailto:dtantanaka at verisign.com]
Sent: Saturday, September 30, 2017 1:25 AM
To: Sarmad Hussain <sarmad.hussain at icann.org>; idngwg at icann.org
Subject: [Ext] Re: [Idngwg] Updated document based on current discussions

Dear All,

I added comments to the latest draft.

Thanks,
Dennis

From: <idngwg-bounces at icann.org<mailto:idngwg-bounces at icann.org>> on behalf of Sarmad Hussain <sarmad.hussain at icann.org<mailto:sarmad.hussain at icann.org>>
Date: Thursday, September 28, 2017 at 6:06 AM
To: "idngwg at icann.org<mailto:idngwg at icann.org>" <idngwg at icann.org<mailto:idngwg at icann.org>>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] [Idngwg] Updated document based on current discussions

Dear All,

Please find attached a clean version of the document for our discussion today, based on the request by WG members in the last meeting.

The changes include:

1.      Addition of a section on “Implementation Notes”
2.      Separating a section/guideline which asks for publishing the IDN policies, with a list of items to be included
3.      Re-ordering of some guidelines to the relevant sections and in better sequence (e.g. guideline on within-script homoglyphs before cross-script homoglyphs)
4.      Accepting changes and removing comments which have been agreed to, for a cleaner version of the document
5.      Updating glossary:
a.      Removing the definition of security and stability from the Glossary, as the WG intended not to define these terms but inherit them from the respective contracts.
b.      Adding definition of Whole-Label Confusables, based on UTR 36

Regards,
Sarmad
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