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<p class="MsoNormal">Please note that the following questions and comments are submitted in my personal capacity. They are organized chronologically under respective headings from the report</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I will be in Buenos Aires and I plan to attend the EWG session with the GNSO on the weekend, but I have conflicting obligations during the general EWG sessions during the week, so I am sending my questions and comments in advance. Feel
free to address them in those sessions if you like.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I want to compliment the EWG for all the work you have done to date. I found the work done since Durban to be outstanding. The report is one of the cleanest I have seen but more importantly, I am very impressed with the way you responded
to public input and also think that you are headed in a direction that holds lots of promise.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><u>Principles for Data Collection, p.12</u></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span style="">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span>Under data collected by registries & registrars, 1.d is ‘Registrant Type’: “<span style="font-size:11.5pt">Indicates the kind of entity identified by Registrant Name: natural person, legal person, proxy service provider, trusted agent
</span>” Is there intention to validate these in anyway and if so how, especially for natural v. legal person?</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><u>Data Disclosure Principles, pp. 13-14</u></p>
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</span></span></span>4.e is Registrant Email Address. Disclosing email for the registrant seems like it could be problematic. What is your thinking in that regard?</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><u>Table of Resulting Data Classifications on pp. 16-17</u></p>
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</span></span></span>I note that the collection of info for Reseller and Registrant State/Province are optional. Are they optional because they
<span style="color:black">are</span><span style="color:#1F497D"> </span>not be applicable in some cases or are they truly optional? If the former, it seems to me that it would be good to clarify that.</p>
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</span></span></span>Original registration date is also optional? Why?</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><u>Data Definitions, p.18</u></p>
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</span></span></span>For the Original Registration Date, does<b><i><span style="color:#1F497D">
</span></i></b><span style="color:black">this</span><span style="color:#1F497D"> </span>
mean for the existing registration or for any that may have occurred earlier that were deleted? Might be good to clarify.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><u>Additional Gated Access Principles, pp. 19-20</u></p>
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</span></span></span>In item 4, one of the possible 4 ways for accreditation for access to data is self-accreditation. In what cases would that be considered? It seems like it could be easily abused.</p>
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</span></span></span>Items 6 & 7 refer to RDS as an organization. What is meant by that? I thought RDS was a system.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><u>Chart on p. 25</u></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span style="">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span>Are the Y & N in the flow chart decision box for steps 4 & 5 reversed?</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><u>Consideration of RDS Costs & Impacts, p. 55</u></p>
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</span></span></span>It seems to me that many of the costs in today’s system are distributed across the community rather than being concentrated in any one entity; don’t you think that the RDS will require significant funding to develop and operate?</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><u>Cost Principles, p.56</u></p>
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</span></span></span>Principle 5 says: “<span style="font-size:11.5pt">A common software platform should be developed and funded by ICANN, to minimize the implement<span style="color:black">ation
</span>costs on registrars/registries.</span>” If and when it is decided to implement the RDS, maybe costs like these could be funded by new gTLD auction funds if there are any.<span style="color:#1F497D"></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><u>Investigation of Applicable Risk/Impact Analysis Frameworks, p. 57</u></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span style="">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span>The last paragraph on p. 57 talks about a risk/impact analysis for the Disclosure Control Framework. Is this something the EWG plans to do and will that be done before the EWG finalizes its recommendations?</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><u>Cost Impacts of Implementing Possible RDS Models, p. 59</u></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span style="">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span>I am sure the EWG realizes that ongoing costs need to be considered as well as upfront costs to implement the RDS.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><u>Lower Costs of Implementation, p. 82</u></p>
<p class="Default" style="margin-left:.5in; text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:11.5pt; font-family:Symbol"><span style="">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span>“Here, <span style="font-size:11.5pt">a model that with lower cost of implementation overall is considered stronger.</span>” I am not sure that this is a true assumption if long-term costs are less.<span style="font-size:11.5pt"></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks in advance,</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Chuck Gomes</p>
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