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    &nbsp;I took a shot at some edits, though I did not address a number of
    the discussion points related to groups.&nbsp; Please also note that the
    requirements we would ask groups to address, including workability
    should probably be specified in an annex.<br>
    <br>
    Hope this helps-<br>
    <br>
    Joe<br>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 7/16/2014 10:52 AM, Milton L Mueller
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        <p class="MsoNormal">I left some words out in a section and
          forgot to date and version number the document, so here it is
          again. PLEASE USE THIS ONE.
          <o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal">--- <o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText">Draft charter for the IANA Stewardship
          Transition Coordination Group<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText">V 2.1 (July 16, 2014)<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText">The IANA transition coordination group
          (ICG) has one deliverable, a proposal to the U.S. Commerce
          Department National Telecommunications and Information
          Administration (NTIA) regarding the transition of NTIA&#8217;s
          stewardship of the IANA functions to the Internet community.<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText">The group&#8217;s mission is to coordinate the
          development of a proposal among the communities affected by
          the IANA functions. The IANA parameters fall into three
          categories: domain names, number resources, and other protocol
          parameters. While there is some overlap among these
          categories, each poses distinct organizational, operational
          and technical issues, and each tends to have distinct
          communities of interest and expertise. For those reasons it is
          best to have work on the three categories of IANA parameters
          proceed autonomously in parallel and be based in the
          respective communities of interest.<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText">The coordination group has four main
          tasks:<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"
          style="margin-left:.75in;text-indent:-.5in;mso-list:l0 level1
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          <!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="mso-list:Ignore">(i)<span
              style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
            </span></span><!--[endif]-->Act as liaison to the three
          communities of interest (names, numbers, protocols)
          <o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"
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          <!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="mso-list:Ignore">(ii)<span
              style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
            </span></span><!--[endif]-->Assess the outputs of the three
          communities of interest for workability, compatibility and
          consensus<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"
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          <!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="mso-list:Ignore">(iii)<span
              style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
            </span></span><!--[endif]-->Assemble a complete proposal for
          the transition <o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"
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          <!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="mso-list:Ignore">(iv)<span
              style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
            </span></span><!--[endif]-->Information sharing and public
          communication<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText">Describing each in more detail:<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"
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          <!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="mso-list:Ignore">(i)<span
              style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
            </span></span><!--[endif]-->Liaison<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText">Members of the ICG will ensure that the
          communities from which they are drawn are working on their
          part of the transition plans. This involves informing them of
          requirements and schedules, tracking progress, and
          highlighting the results or remaining issues. The role of a
          coordination group member during this phase is to provide
          status updates about the progress of his or her community in
          developing their component, and to coordinate which community
          will develop a transition proposal for each area of overlap
          (e.g., special-use registry)<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"
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          lfo2">
          <!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="mso-list:Ignore">(ii)<span
              style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
            </span></span><!--[endif]-->Assessment<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText">When the group receives output from the
          independent groups it will discuss and assess their
          workability, assess their compatibility and interoperability
          with the proposals of the other groups, and verify their
          levels of support in the respective communities. The ICG might
          at some point detect problems with the component proposals. At
          that point the role of the ICG is to communicate that back to
          the relevant communities so that they (the relevant
          communities) can address the issues. In assessing consensus,
          the coordination group will rely to some extent on its members
          to reflect to the rest of the group the support levels within
          the member's own community, but the group is also authorized
          to engage in independent assessments, such as public notice
          and comment periods. <o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"
          style="margin-left:.75in;text-indent:-.5in;mso-list:l1 level1
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          <!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="mso-list:Ignore">(iii)<span
              style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
            </span></span><!--[endif]-->Assembling and submitting a
          complete proposal<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText">The assembly effort involves taking the
          proposals for the different components and verifying that they
          fulfil the intended scope, meet the intended criteria, that
          there are no missing parts, and that the whole fits together.
          The ICG will then develop a draft final proposal that achieves
          consensus within the ICG itself. The ICG will then put this
          proposal up for public comment involving a reasonable period
          of time for reviewing the draft proposal, analyzing and
          preparing supportive or critical comments. The ICG will then
          review these comments and determine whether modifications are
          required. If not, and the coordination group agrees, the
          proposal will be submitted to NTIA. If changes are required to
          fix problems or achieve broader support, the ICG is authorized
          to make minor amendments in consultation with the affected
          communities of interest. If, in the ICG&#8217;s opinion, broad
          public support for the proposal as articulated by the NTIA is
          not present, the parts of the proposal that are not supported
          return to the liaison phase. <o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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              style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
            </span></span><!--[endif]-->Information sharing<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText">The ICG should serve as a central
          clearinghouse for public information about the IANA
          stewardship transition process. Its secretariat should
          maintain an independent website, under its own domain, where
          status updates, meetings and notices are announced, proposals
          are stored, the ICG members are listed, etc. <o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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