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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Mohamed<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">This is not an updated charter it is a completely re-written charter.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">As such, it moves us backwards, not forwards. I also note that it lacks the critical language about the ICG’s relationship to the other enhanced accountability
process and thus is non-negotiably unacceptable to my stakeholder group and, I suspect, to all the other DNS-based representatives. I would encourage ALAC to start with the draft that we worked on and provide commentary on those parts that it feels are inadequate,
unclear or missing. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">--MM<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> internal-cg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Mohamed El Bashir<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, August 08, 2014 6:36 AM<br>
<b>Cc:</b> ICG<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Internal-cg] Charter commenting - ALAC Comments ( Updated Charter Draft )<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Dear Colleagues, <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">While ICG is finalizing the setup and publication of charter comments process, which i hope it can be published as as soon possible.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">I would like to provide you with ALAC comments on the draft ICG charter, ALAC has discussed been discussing the charter and we are proposing the attached updated charter document.
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<p class="MsoNormal">The current draft charter is a too long document ( 6 pages ), not easy to ready and could be subject to different interpretations. The attached ALAC draft is one page only summarizing the charter objectives, attempting to make it easy to
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<p class="MsoNormal">It has contain ALAC comments in the latest charter draft.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Kind Regards,<br>
Mohamed<o:p></o:p></p>
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