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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Joe<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I think this is too complicated and too big a deviation from our earlier approach.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I still think the solution to JJ’s concerns is to be found in the notion of the operational communities as convenors of proposal development processes that must include other interested parties.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I think all we need to do is alter the following sentence in the way I suggest below:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Original sentence: <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText">The IANA Stewardship Transition Coordination Group (ICG) seeks
<i>complete formal responses</i> to this RFP from the “operational communities” of IANA (i.e., those with direct operational or service relationships with IANA, in connection with names, numbers, or protocol parameters).
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Proposed modification: <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText">The IANA Stewardship Transition Coordination Group (ICG) requests “operational communities” of IANA (i.e., those with direct operational or service relationships with IANA, in connection with names, numbers, or protocol parameters) to
convene processes to develop <i>complete formal responses</i> to this RFP. <o:p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">This is a simpler change, does not alter the basic assumptions of our charter, but also makes it clear that the operational communities are responsible for convening processes that, according to other language
that is already in the RFP, <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText">Proposals are expected to enjoy a broad consensus of support from all interested parties. During the development of their proposals, the operational communities are requested to consult and work with other affected parties. Likewise,
in order to help the ICG maintain its light coordination role, all other affected parties are strongly encouraged to participate in community processes.
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<p class="MsoPlainText">…<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">Communities are asked to adhere to open and inclusive processes in developing their responses…. Etc.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Milton L Mueller<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Laura J and L. Douglas Meredith Professor
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Syracuse University School of Information Studies<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><a href="http://faculty.ischool.syr.edu/mueller/"><span style="color:blue">http://faculty.ischool.syr.edu/mueller/</span></a>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:windowtext"> internal-cg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>joseph alhadeff<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, August 26, 2014 9:01 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> internal-cg@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Internal-cg] RFP subgroup<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">So here's a shot at compromise text...<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 8/26/2014 8:43 AM, Milton L Mueller wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I want to be on it.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Milton L Mueller<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Laura J and L. Douglas Meredith Professor <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Syracuse University School of Information Studies<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><a href="http://faculty.ischool.syr.edu/mueller/">http://faculty.ischool.syr.edu/mueller/</a>
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<pre>_______________________________________________<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>Internal-cg mailing list<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre><a href="mailto:Internal-cg@icann.org">Internal-cg@icann.org</a><o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg</a><o:p></o:p></pre>
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