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    Milton:<br>
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    I still think we need to address the ability of stakeholders to
    directly comment to us in the development or on the unitary
    proposal. That is factual.<br>
    <br>
    I'm also don't think that my language changes the charter as only
    operational communities submit proposals...<br>
    <br>
    joe<br>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 8/26/2014 9:16 AM, Milton L Mueller
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        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Joe<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I think this is
            too complicated and too big a deviation from our earlier
            approach.
            <o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I still think
            the solution to JJ&#8217;s concerns is to be found in the notion
            of the operational communities as convenors of proposal
            development processes that must include other interested
            parties.
            <o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I think all we
            need to do is alter the following sentence in the way I
            suggest below:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Original
            sentence: <o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText">The IANA Stewardship Transition
          Coordination Group (ICG) seeks
          <i>complete formal responses</i> to this RFP from the
          &#8220;operational communities&#8221; of IANA (i.e., those with direct
          operational or service relationships with IANA, in connection
          with names, numbers, or protocol parameters).&nbsp;
          <o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Proposed
            modification: <o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText">The IANA Stewardship Transition
          Coordination Group (ICG) requests &#8220;operational communities&#8221; of
          IANA (i.e., those with direct operational or service
          relationships with IANA, in connection with names, numbers, or
          protocol parameters) to convene processes to develop <i>complete
            formal responses</i> to this RFP. <o:p>
          </o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">This is a
            simpler change, does not alter the basic assumptions of our
            charter, but also makes it clear that the operational
            communities are responsible for convening processes that,
            according to other language that is already in the RFP, <o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText">Proposals are expected to enjoy a broad
          consensus of support from all interested parties.&nbsp; During the
          development of their proposals, the operational communities
          are requested to consult and work with other affected parties.
          Likewise, in order to help the ICG maintain its light
          coordination role, all other affected parties are strongly
          encouraged to participate in community processes.
          <o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText">&#8230;<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoPlainText">Communities are asked to adhere to open
          and inclusive processes in developing their responses&#8230;. Etc.<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Milton L
              Mueller<o:p></o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Laura J and
              L. Douglas Meredith Professor
              <o:p></o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Syracuse
              University School of Information Studies<o:p></o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><a
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              <o:p></o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:windowtext">
                  <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org">internal-cg-bounces@icann.org</a>
                  [<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org">mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
                  <b>On Behalf Of </b>joseph alhadeff<br>
                  <b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, August 26, 2014 9:01 AM<br>
                  <b>To:</b> <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:internal-cg@icann.org">internal-cg@icann.org</a><br>
                  <b>Subject:</b> Re: [Internal-cg] RFP subgroup<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal">So here's a shot at compromise text...<o:p></o:p></p>
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            <p class="MsoNormal">On 8/26/2014 8:43 AM, Milton L Mueller
              wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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            <p class="MsoNormal">I want to be on it.<o:p></o:p></p>
            <p class="MsoNormal">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
            <p class="MsoNormal">Milton L Mueller<o:p></o:p></p>
            <p class="MsoNormal">Laura J and L. Douglas Meredith
              Professor <o:p></o:p></p>
            <p class="MsoNormal">Syracuse University School of
              Information Studies<o:p></o:p></p>
            <p class="MsoNormal"><a moz-do-not-send="true"
                href="http://faculty.ischool.syr.edu/mueller/">http://faculty.ischool.syr.edu/mueller/</a>
              <o:p></o:p></p>
            <p class="MsoNormal">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
            <p class="MsoNormal">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
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                <o:p></o:p></span></p>
            <pre>_______________________________________________<o:p></o:p></pre>
            <pre>Internal-cg mailing list<o:p></o:p></pre>
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