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Milton:<br>
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I still think we need to address the ability of stakeholders to
directly comment to us in the development or on the unitary
proposal. That is factual.<br>
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I'm also don't think that my language changes the charter as only
operational communities submit proposals...<br>
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joe<br>
<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 8/26/2014 9:16 AM, Milton L Mueller
wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Joe<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I think this is
too complicated and too big a deviation from our earlier
approach.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I still think
the solution to JJ’s concerns is to be found in the notion
of the operational communities as convenors of proposal
development processes that must include other interested
parties.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I think all we
need to do is alter the following sentence in the way I
suggest below:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Original
sentence: <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">The IANA Stewardship Transition
Coordination Group (ICG) seeks
<i>complete formal responses</i> to this RFP from the
“operational communities” of IANA (i.e., those with direct
operational or service relationships with IANA, in connection
with names, numbers, or protocol parameters).
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Proposed
modification: <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">The IANA Stewardship Transition
Coordination Group (ICG) requests “operational communities” of
IANA (i.e., those with direct operational or service
relationships with IANA, in connection with names, numbers, or
protocol parameters) to convene processes to develop <i>complete
formal responses</i> to this RFP. <o:p>
</o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">This is a
simpler change, does not alter the basic assumptions of our
charter, but also makes it clear that the operational
communities are responsible for convening processes that,
according to other language that is already in the RFP, <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">Proposals are expected to enjoy a broad
consensus of support from all interested parties. During the
development of their proposals, the operational communities
are requested to consult and work with other affected parties.
Likewise, in order to help the ICG maintain its light
coordination role, all other affected parties are strongly
encouraged to participate in community processes.
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">…<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">Communities are asked to adhere to open
and inclusive processes in developing their responses…. Etc.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Milton L
Mueller<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Laura J and
L. Douglas Meredith Professor
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Syracuse
University School of Information Studies<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>joseph alhadeff<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, August 26, 2014 9:01 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:internal-cg@icann.org">internal-cg@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Internal-cg] RFP subgroup<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">So here's a shot at compromise text...<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 8/26/2014 8:43 AM, Milton L Mueller
wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I want to be on it.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Milton L Mueller<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Laura J and L. Douglas Meredith
Professor <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Syracuse University School of
Information Studies<o:p></o:p></p>
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<pre>_______________________________________________<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>Internal-cg mailing list<o:p></o:p></pre>
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