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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Thanks Alissa for your work on this. I’m sure we could continue word-smithing this for a long time, and I’m happy to go.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Kavouss’s comment on light: I like the term as it reminds everyone that we are not planning to play the autocrats. But if non-native English speakers find
the meaning obscure I’m ok without. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> internal-cg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Kavouss Arasteh<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 29 August 2014 13:32<br>
<b>To:</b> Daniel Karrenberg<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Coordination Group<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Internal-cg] RFP - publishable draft?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear Alissa,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear All,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I suggest some small amendments to make various parts of the text consistent with each other<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">See attachment <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Kavouss the l<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">2014-08-29 13:37 GMT+02:00 Daniel Karrenberg <<a href="mailto:daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net" target="_blank">daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net</a>>:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">On 28.08.14 23:36 , Alissa Cooper wrote:<br>
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> Are there any objections to publishing this as a draft (and having the<br>
> secretariat host it on our web site and make an announcement about its<br>
> existence) by Sept 1?<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I support publishing this as a daft with Elise's corrections.<br>
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Daniel<br>
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