<div dir="ltr"><div>Dear Milton,</div><div>Thank you very much for your kind response .You are among the most knowledgeable and competent as far as I understand the exchange of message.</div><div>Pls kindly note that the term LIGHT before coordination, weakenes our actions .It could be interpreted that the coordination actions that we undertake is not sufficiently serious as it is qualified by the adjective LIGHT.</div>
<div><br></div><div>Would it cause any difficulty that we delete that and just refer to coordination without any qualification.</div><div>Regards</div><div>Kavouss </div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">
2014-08-29 15:54 GMT+02:00 Milton L Mueller <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:mueller@syr.edu" target="_blank">mueller@syr.edu</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">Would prefer to keep “light” in there.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">Milton L Mueller<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Martin Boyle<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, August 29, 2014 8:46 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Kavouss Arasteh; Daniel Karrenberg</span><div><div class="h5"><br>
<b>Cc:</b> Coordination Group<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Internal-cg] RFP - publishable draft?<u></u><u></u></div></div><p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">Thanks Alissa for your work on this. I’m sure we could continue word-smithing this for a long time, and I’m happy to go.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">Kavouss’s comment on light: I like the term as it reminds everyone that we are not planning to play the autocrats. But if non-native English
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">Cheers<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Kavouss Arasteh<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 29 August 2014 13:32<br>
<b>To:</b> Daniel Karrenberg<br>
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<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Internal-cg] RFP - publishable draft?<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">2014-08-29 13:37 GMT+02:00 Daniel Karrenberg <<a href="mailto:daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net" target="_blank">daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net</a>>:<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">On 28.08.14 23:36 , Alissa Cooper wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">I support publishing this as a daft with Elise's corrections.<br>
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