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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">My opinions regarding Kavouss’s proposed changes:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Would prefer to keep “light” in there.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">OK to remove the word “only” from the paragraph on Comments<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">OK to replace “direct” with “forward”
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">OK to replace “encourages” with “urges” &nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Milton L Mueller<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Laura J and L. Douglas Meredith Professor
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Syracuse University School of Information Studies<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> internal-cg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Martin Boyle<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, August 29, 2014 8:46 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Kavouss Arasteh; Daniel Karrenberg<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Coordination Group<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Internal-cg] RFP - publishable draft?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thanks Alissa for your work on this.&nbsp; I’m sure we could continue word-smithing this for a long time, and I’m happy to go.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Kavouss’s comment on light:&nbsp; I like the term as it reminds everyone that we are not planning to play the autocrats.&nbsp; But if non-native English
 speakers find the meaning obscure I’m ok without.&nbsp; <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Cheers<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Martin<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">
<a href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org">internal-cg-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org">mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Kavouss Arasteh<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 29 August 2014 13:32<br>
<b>To:</b> Daniel Karrenberg<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Coordination Group<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Internal-cg] RFP - publishable draft?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Dear Alissa,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Dear All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">I suggest some small amendments to make various parts of the text consistent with each other<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">See attachment <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Kavouss &nbsp;the l<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">2014-08-29 13:37 GMT&#43;02:00 Daniel Karrenberg &lt;<a href="mailto:daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net" target="_blank">daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net</a>&gt;:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">On 28.08.14 23:36 , Alissa Cooper wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span lang="EN-GB">&gt;<br>
&gt; Are there any objections to publishing this as a draft (and having the<br>
&gt; secretariat host it on our web site and make an announcement about its<br>
&gt; existence) by Sept 1?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">I support publishing this as a daft with Elise's corrections.<br>
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Daniel<br>
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