<div dir="ltr"><div>Dear All,</div><div>Now that we have reconciled on RFP as announced by Alissa to have been finalized </div><div>I want to come back to come back to Consensus Building.</div><div>I the meantime I have amended the proposals that I made based on some comments and attached here for your kind consideration as ka v3 </div>
<div>Regards</div><div>KAVOUSS </div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">2014-08-30 23:10 GMT+02:00 Martin Boyle <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:Martin.Boyle@nominet.org.uk" target="_blank">Martin.Boyle@nominet.org.uk</a>></span>:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">Alissa,<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">Thanks for this: I can’t say any of these changes really make much difference to the text as far as I am concerned so, although I still would prefer the original
wording I’m ok to accept them all. I’d note that on page 2 the first sentence in the first paragraph under I does not read right to me: should it read “…and that all interested parties *<b>should</b>* get involved…”? But please do not hold this up this
draft any further on my account.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">On your “separate point,” I would agree that there needs to be a certain time lapse between drafts to allow for all comments to come in. Two days can actually
mean only a day and a half with time-zones and accidents on time of posting. <u></u>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">I’d go back to a point that NZ-Keith made about decisions on conference calls and re-think it for discussion drafts – that there should be time for proposals
and counter-proposals on any draft, followed by a complete clean copy incorporating any amendments from the discussion. The important stage is how long a clean draft is on the table without any further comments before it is adopted: could we make it 3 days
for this phase (unless all protagonists in the discussion have agreed with the suggested compromise), which allows for peoples’ absences or travel schedules?
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">But more important is, let’s try not to rush from one draft to another unless there is a good reason (like the page is getting too cluttered to read)?<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">And let us all also remember that we all have our own views and that these will often be at odds: when we propose a change, there should be a decent time for
others to consider this idea and to formulate a response. I have been in the position where I have been drafting a commentary on one draft when the next has dropped into the box: very frustrating! But also, this is not very conducive to coherent discussion.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">Best<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";font-size:10pt">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";font-size:10pt"> <a href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">internal-cg-bounces@icann.org</a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">internal-cg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Alissa Cooper<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 30 August 2014 19:13<br>
<b>To:</b> Kavouss Arasteh; Coordination Group</span><div><div class="h5"><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Internal-cg] RFP - publishable draft?<u></u><u></u></div></div><p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">Attached and in dropbox are v14-alc-ka-alc and v14-alc-ka-alc-clean. These contain the changes suggested by Kavouss and the “light-handed” compromise suggested
by Milton. As soon as we get the link to the centralized information portal from Alice (which we need on page 1 of the RFP), we’ll get the secretariat to post this version on the web site and make an announcement.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">On a separate note, it might make sense to spend a little time at the Sept 6 meeting talking about expectations for people’s response times to emails, document
reviews, etc. As I have already noted on this list, in my opinion allowing at least 48 hours for responses during the week and 72 hours for responses over a weekend is justified by the fact that we are all busy people volunteering our time for this activity.
In the case of this particular document, the edits from Kavouss arrived in my inbox at 5:30am in my time zone on Friday, while I was asleep. I woke up a few hours later, answered some other emails (since I knew we wouldn’t have the portal link ready before
I got on my flights to Turkey) and left for the airport to travel to Istanbul at 9:00am. I spent 24 of the 26 hours since then in transit. If people expect faster response times, that is something we should discuss as a group.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">Thanks,<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">Alissa<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">On 8/30/14, 5:36 AM, "Kavouss Arasteh" <<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com" target="_blank">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">Please advise whether or not after several support to my proposal as contained/ mentioned in rev 2 that I did send you three days ago , v14 is now amended or
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">Regards<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">2014-08-30 14:31 GMT+02:00 Kavouss Arasteh <<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com" target="_blank">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>>:<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">Dear All,<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">My rev 2 doc. relating to amenfment to v 14 of Draft RFP has not been taken into account<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">I think it is not fair withourt examining a proposal to ignor it<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12pt"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">---------- Forwarded message ----------<br>
From: <b>Kavouss Arasteh</b> <<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com" target="_blank">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>><br>
Date: 2014-08-30 14:30 GMT+02:00<br>
Subject: Fwd: [Internal-cg] RFP - publishable draft?<br>
To: Coordination Group <<a href="mailto:Internal-cg@icann.org" target="_blank">Internal-cg@icann.org</a>><br>
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<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">Dear All,<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">My rev 2 doc. relating to amenfment to v 14 of Draft RFP has not been taken into account<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">I think it is not fair withourt examining a proposal it should be ignored<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(136,136,136);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">Kavouss
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From: <b>joseph alhadeff</b> <<a href="mailto:joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com" target="_blank">joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com</a>><br>
Date: 2014-08-30 11:35 GMT+02:00<br>
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] RFP - publishable draft?<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12pt"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">To: Kavouss Arasteh <<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com" target="_blank">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>><br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">Off list:<br>
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I've lost a bit of the thread...<br>
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Which of your proposed edits s the one that hasn't been properly accounted for?<br>
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Joe<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">On 8/30/2014 3:31 AM, Kavouss Arasteh wrote:<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">Dear All,<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">Dear Alissa<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">What Milton agreed was on consensus building process and not on RFP .<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">What we are talking here is RFP. I have made some changes which are not of editorial nature but essential.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">There are inconsistencies in the v14 as I have indicated.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">I have sent that twice and I request to be considered before being published as draft .<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">I am not in the little group nevertheless the amendment that I have proposed are essebntial.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">However, should every body agree that the draft should be published I have no problem provided that everybody understand that the amendments proposed by me are
still valid and to be considered.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">I have informed in different manner
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">Regards<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">Kavouss
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">2014-08-30 9:29 GMT+02:00 Kavouss Arasteh <<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com" target="_blank">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>>:<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">Dear All,<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">Dear Alissa<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">what Milton agreed was on consensus building process.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">What we are talking here is RFP. I have made some changes which are not of editorial nature but essential.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">There are inconsistencies in the v14 as I have indicated.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">I have sent that twice and I request to be considered before being published as draft .<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">I am not in the little group nevertheless the amendment that I have proposed are essebntial.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">However, should every body agree that the draft should be published I have no problem provided that everybody understand that the amendments proposed by me are
still valid and to be considered.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">I have informed in different manner
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">Regards<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">2014-08-30 7:06 GMT+02:00 Paul Wilson <<a href="mailto:pwilson@apnic.net" target="_blank">pwilson@apnic.net</a>>:
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:10.5pt">I am keen to publish the draft, as a draft, soon please. It doesn’t need to be perfected before we do that.<br>
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For the record I agree with Kavouss’ suggestions, as amended by Milton, and happy for these to be included<br>
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thanks<br>
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Paul.<br>
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On 30 Aug 2014, at 4:26 am, Kavouss Arasteh <<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com" target="_blank">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br>
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> Milton,<br>
> Thank you again for yr analysis<br>
> Yes I could make a consensus with your last suggestion<br>
> Pls go ahead and I thank you for that.<br>
> By the way do you know any ting about a book published in 70 s about that group?<br>
> tks and have a nice week-end ,if I do not hear from you<br>
> Kavouss<br>
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> 2014-08-29 20:12 GMT+02:00 Mohamed El Bashir <<a href="mailto:mbashir@mbash.net" target="_blank">mbashir@mbash.net</a>>:<br>
> After reviewing Kavouss RFP updates, I prefer to keep the text " light coordination role" and I am fine with the rest of the updates .<br>
><br>
> We suppose to finished and published the RFP yesterday, I propose move ahead and publish the latest version as agreed before the IGF.<br>
><br>
> Kind Regards,<br>
> Mohamed<br>
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> On 29 Aug 2014, at 19:47, Kavouss Arasteh <<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com" target="_blank">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br>
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>> Dear Manal<br>
>> ,<br>
>> I am not pointing toward any one who made the suggestion that the adjective " Light " being added to the word or term " Coordination "<br>
>> I am just saysing that ICG tasks . interalia, is to coordinate the activities .<br>
>> This does not any thing to do with TOP down or button up process .Just it does not feet. It give the impression that the activities of ICCG on this matter is a light activitiwes and not a complete and in-depth<br>
>> Tks<br>
>> Kavouss<br>
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>> 2014-08-29 19:10 GMT+02:00 Manal Ismail <<a href="mailto:manal@tra.gov.eg" target="_blank">manal@tra.gov.eg</a>>:<br>
>> This was not the intention of course .. I have inserted this clause “in order to help ICG maintain its light coordination role” as I thought 2 things would make it more convincing for non-operational parties to work through the operational communities processes:<br>
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>> - to make sure the ICG does not have a top-down decision-making authority, and<br>
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>> - to make sure their contributions are considered early within the process, and directly discussed with the relevant party<br>
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>> Just thought to clarify, but I’m flexible should colleagues feel it does not serve the purpose of the first bullet ..<br>
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>> Kind Regards<br>
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>> --Manal<br>
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>> From: <a href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">internal-cg-bounces@icann.org</a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">internal-cg-bounces@icann.org</a>] On Behalf Of Kavouss Arasteh<br>
>> Sent: Friday, August 29, 2014 6:45 PM<br>
>> To: Milton L Mueller<br>
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>> Cc: Coordination Group<br>
>> Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] RFP - publishable draft?<br>
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>> Dear Milton,<br>
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>> Thank you very much for your kind response .You are among the most knowledgeable and competent as far as I understand the exchange of message.<br>
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>> Pls kindly note that the term LIGHT before coordination, weakenes our actions .It could be interpreted that the coordination actions that we undertake is not sufficiently serious as it is qualified by the adjective LIGHT.<br>
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>> Would it cause any difficulty that we delete that and just refer to coordination without any qualification.<br>
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>> Regards<br>
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>> Kavouss<br>
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>> 2014-08-29 15:54 GMT+02:00 Milton L Mueller <<a href="mailto:mueller@syr.edu" target="_blank">mueller@syr.edu</a>>:<br>
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>> My opinions regarding Kavouss’s proposed changes:<br>
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>> Would prefer to keep “light” in there.<br>
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>> OK to remove the word “only” from the paragraph on Comments<br>
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>> OK to replace “direct” with “forward”<br>
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>> OK to replace “encourages” with “urges”<br>
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>> Milton L Mueller<br>
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>> Laura J and L. Douglas Meredith Professor<br>
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>> Syracuse University School of Information Studies<br>
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>> <a href="http://faculty.ischool.syr.edu/mueller/" target="_blank">http://faculty.ischool.syr.edu/mueller/</a><br>
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>> From: <a href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">internal-cg-bounces@icann.org</a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">internal-cg-bounces@icann.org</a>] On Behalf Of Martin Boyle<br>
>> Sent: Friday, August 29, 2014 8:46 AM<br>
>> To: Kavouss Arasteh; Daniel Karrenberg<br>
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>> Cc: Coordination Group<br>
>> Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] RFP - publishable draft?<br>
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>> Thanks Alissa for your work on this. I’m sure we could continue word-smithing this for a long time, and I’m happy to go.<br>
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>> Kavouss’s comment on light: I like the term as it reminds everyone that we are not planning to play the autocrats. But if non-native English speakers find the meaning obscure I’m ok without.<br>
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>> Cheers<br>
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>> Martin<br>
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>> From: <a href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">internal-cg-bounces@icann.org</a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">internal-cg-bounces@icann.org</a>] On Behalf Of Kavouss Arasteh<br>
>> Sent: 29 August 2014 13:32<br>
>> To: Daniel Karrenberg<br>
>> Cc: Coordination Group<br>
>> Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] RFP - publishable draft?<br>
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>> Dear Alissa,<br>
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>> Dear All,<br>
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>> I suggest some small amendments to make various parts of the text consistent with each other<br>
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>> See attachment<br>
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>> Kavouss the l<br>
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>> 2014-08-29 13:37 GMT+02:00 Daniel Karrenberg <<a href="mailto:daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net" target="_blank">daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net</a>>:<br>
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>> On 28.08.14 23:36 , Alissa Cooper wrote:<br>
>> > ...<br>
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>> ><br>
>> > Are there any objections to publishing this as a draft (and having the<br>
>> > secretariat host it on our web site and make an announcement about its<br>
>> > existence) by Sept 1?<br>
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>> I support publishing this as a daft with Elise's corrections.<br>
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>> Daniel<br>
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