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<DIV>Alissa, thank you very much for putting it together to an understandable
document which I’m in agreement with.</DIV>
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<DIV style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri'; COLOR: #000000">I’m also
fine with Joe’s edits. I think changing the headline of 3. may consequently
require to remove the indents a, b and c.</DIV>
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<DIV style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri'; COLOR: #000000">In chapter
4. there is a typo in the penultimate line to c. It should read “from” instead
“form”.</DIV>
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<DIV style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri'; COLOR: #000000">Looking
forward to find consensus on this document tomorrow.<BR><BR>Best
regards<BR><BR>Wolf-Ulrich<BR><BR></DIV>
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<DIV style="font-color: black"><B>From:</B> <A title=joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com
href="mailto:joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com">joseph alhadeff</A> </DIV>
<DIV><B>Sent:</B> Tuesday, September 16, 2014 2:14 PM</DIV>
<DIV><B>To:</B> <A title=internal-cg@icann.org
href="mailto:internal-cg@icann.org">internal-cg@icann.org</A> </DIV>
<DIV><B>Subject:</B> Re: [Internal-cg] Consensus document - for discussion Sept
17</DIV></DIV></DIV>
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Colleagues:<BR><BR>The draft is acceptable as is - thanks for your work on
editing... I have proposed a few non-substantive edits to improve
understanding - for example use of public comment forum may be read not to
include written comments, propose replacing forum with consultation,
etc.<BR><BR>One possible addition might be a reaffirmation of our commitment to
consultation which should be differentiated from our 7 day period for
decisions... Possible language which could be added to making decisions
could be:<BR><BR><SPAN
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will make all reasonable efforts to enable member stakeholder communities
to have appropriate time to consult with their members on issues on which the
ICG will make substantive decisions.<SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">
</SPAN>Where appropriate and practicable, public comment periods will also be
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<DIV class=moz-cite-prefix>On 9/16/2014 4:40 AM, Kavouss Arasteh
wrote:<BR></DIV>
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<DIV>I am at another meeting </DIV>
<DIV>I have read your edited text which seems to cover most or almost
every points.</DIV>
<DIV>Please let me to ck it again and come back to you </DIV>
<DIV>Kavouss </DIV></BLOCKQUOTE><BR>
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