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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I do hope that we can use the version posted in drop box less than a day ago, which we have all had a chance to read and consider carefully. I do not think
that </span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">there is any need for an editorially updated doc.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Best<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Martin</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> internal-cg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Manal Ismail<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 17 September 2014 16:31<br>
<b>To:</b> Kavouss Arasteh<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Coordination Group<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Internal-cg] Consensus document - for discussion Sept 17<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Dear Mr. Arasteh ..<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I’m not debating your request, I just noticed I typo in my below email that I wish to correct ..<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I meant to say “… I hope there is
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:red">no
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">need for an editorially updated doc. …”
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Just thought it’s worth noting .. apologies for the inconvenience ..<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Kind Regards<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">--Manal<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> Kavouss Arasteh [<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com">mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>]
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<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, September 17, 2014 5:03 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Manal Ismail<br>
<b>Cc:</b> joseph alhadeff; WUKnoben; Alissa Cooper; Coordination Group<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Internal-cg] Consensus document - for discussion Sept 17<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Alissa,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Once again I request to post the draft with new name final draft for conference call<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Kavouss <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">2014-09-17 16:34 GMT+02:00 Manal Ismail <<a href="mailto:manal@tra.gov.eg" target="_blank">manal@tra.gov.eg</a>>:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Thank you all for your replies, comments and clarification of the need for paragraph 4 referenced below ..
</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">I would just like to note that:</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">-</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:7.0pt;color:#1F497D">
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">I have not edited the version shared by Alissa to be used on the call .. The final draft is already there untouched .. so I hope there is need for an editorially updated doc. with new reference called Draft for
Conference call ..</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">I have sent my remarks over email as wisely suggested by Alissa to avoid such confusion .. I thought this is going to be equally good, if not better, to sharing them over the call ..</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">I have already mentioned at the very beginning that I’m flexible to revert to the original text if so agreed ..
</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D"> </span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Looking forward to our call later today ..</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D"> </span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Kind Regards</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">--Manal</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D"> </span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> joseph alhadeff [mailto:<a href="mailto:joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com" target="_blank">joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com</a>]
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<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, September 17, 2014 2:37 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> WUKnoben; Manal Ismail; Alissa Cooper; <a href="mailto:internal-cg@icann.org" target="_blank">
internal-cg@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Internal-cg] Consensus document - for discussion Sept 17</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US">I am sympathetic to the concern raised by Kavous that we need a stable draft to consider on the call so that everyone will have had an opportunity to review....
there will be opportunities on the call to raise any residual concerns. can we at least suggest that at least 4 hours before the call a final draft for consideration will be posted so that we are all on the same page?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US">On 9/17/2014 6:59 AM, WUKnoben wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US">Thanks Manal,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US">I’ve inserted my comments in red<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Best regards<br>
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Wolf-Ulrich<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;background:whitesmoke"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">
<a href="mailto:manal@tra.gov.eg" target="_blank" title="manal@tra.gov.eg">Manal Ismail</a>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;background:whitesmoke"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">Sent:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> Wednesday,
September 17, 2014 12:34 PM</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;background:whitesmoke"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">To:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">
<a href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in" target="_blank" title="alissa@cooperw.in">Alissa Cooper</a> ;
<a href="mailto:joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com" target="_blank" title="joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com">
joseph alhadeff</a> ; <a href="mailto:internal-cg@icann.org" target="_blank" title="internal-cg@icann.org">
internal-cg@icann.org</a> </span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;background:whitesmoke"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">Subject:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> Re:
[Internal-cg] Consensus document - for discussion Sept 17</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Many thanks Alissa and all who have contributed to this document ..</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">I'm sending my editorial remarks below following your suggestion ..
</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">It's worth noting that I'm flexible to revert to the original language wherever deemed more appropriate ..</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Page 1:</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span lang="EN-US">-</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:7.0pt">
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">4<sup>th</sup> paragraph under 2. : replace capital 'M' of 'ICG Members' with small 'm' for consistency</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span lang="EN-US"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">I've tried the url at the footnote and it did not work (might be my problem but worth someone else checking) ..</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:red">you’re right re the footnote on page 1. The document can be found on
</span><span lang="EN-US"><a href="https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/respectful-communication.pdf" target="_blank" title="https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/respectful-communication.pdf"><span style="color:red">https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/respectful-communication.pdf</span></a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Page 2:</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">3<sup>rd</sup> paragraph under 3. :
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:"Times New Roman , serif","serif"">For cases
<s>for which</s> <span style="color:red">where</span> it has been previously agreed that a decision is to be made at a given meeting and one or more members are not
<s>in a position to attend</s> <span style="color:red">present at</span> that meeting, these members may provide their views to the ICG in advance in order that those views be considered at the scheduled meeting<s> for decision making</s>. Should the decision
made not meet the <s>requirements </s><span style="color:red">views</span> of those absent, there should be another attempt to find a suitable compromise. Absent members<s>
</s>should be invited to provide the ICG with a written statement of their concerns for inclusion in the report /conclusions of the ICG.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span lang="EN-US"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">4<sup>th</sup> paragraph under 3. : I suggest the deletion of this paragraph as, to me, it is completely redundant to paragraph 3 above .. if it was decided to remain, there's a missing full-stop at the end of
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</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:red">I’m not sure but think para 3 is related to absent members who may be opposed whereas para 4 refers to opposed members in general. Maybe Joe can assist...</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">I do not dare to suggest any changes on the following pages
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Wingdings;color:#1F497D">J</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D"> ..</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:red">be courageous if you are not convinced...</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Hope you find the above straight forward non-substantial changes ..
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Kind Regards</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">--Manal</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Alissa Cooper<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, September 17, 2014 2:40 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> joseph alhadeff; <a href="mailto:internal-cg@icann.org" target="_blank">
internal-cg@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Internal-cg] Consensus document - for discussion Sept 17</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt">All,</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt">Attached and in Dropbox are the versions we will use on the call on Sept 17:</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt">All of the changes since v12-MU-ALC are editorial (mostly typo fixes and white space deletions), except one: on page 1, I added the text
suggested by Joe about public comment periods. The editorial fixes include the suggestions made by Joe, Wolf-Ulrich, Kavouss, and Milton (off-list).</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt">If people spot further editorial issues prior to the call, please send them in email to the mailing list, rather than editing the document
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The draft is acceptable as is - thanks for your work on editing... I have proposed a few non-substantive edits to improve understanding - for example use of public comment forum may be read not to include written comments, propose replacing forum with consultation,
etc.<br>
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One possible addition might be a reaffirmation of our commitment to consultation which should be differentiated from our 7 day period for decisions... Possible language which could be added to making decisions could be:<br>
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</span><span lang="EN-US">ICG will make all reasonable efforts to enable member stakeholder communities to have appropriate time to consult with their members on issues on which the ICG will make substantive decisions. Where appropriate and practicable, public
comment periods will also be provided</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt"> .<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt">I have read your edited text which seems to cover most or almost every points.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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