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<DIV>Thanks Manal,</DIV>
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<DIV style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri'; COLOR: #000000">I’ve
inserted my comments in red<BR></DIV>
<DIV style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Calibri'; COLOR: #000000"><BR>Best
regards<BR><BR>Wolf-Ulrich<BR><BR></DIV>
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<DIV style="font-color: black"><B>From:</B> <A title=manal@tra.gov.eg
href="mailto:manal@tra.gov.eg">Manal Ismail</A> </DIV>
<DIV><B>Sent:</B> Wednesday, September 17, 2014 12:34 PM</DIV>
<DIV><B>To:</B> <A title=alissa@cooperw.in
href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in">Alissa Cooper</A> ; <A
title=joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com href="mailto:joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com">joseph
alhadeff</A> ; <A title=internal-cg@icann.org
href="mailto:internal-cg@icann.org">internal-cg@icann.org</A> </DIV>
<DIV><B>Subject:</B> Re: [Internal-cg] Consensus document - for discussion Sept
17</DIV></DIV></DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d">Many thanks Alissa and all who have contributed to this
document ..<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d">I'm sending my editorial remarks below following your
suggestion .. <o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d">It's worth noting that I'm flexible to revert to the
original language wherever deemed more appropriate ..<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d">Page 1:<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
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style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal; TEXT-INDENT: -0.25in; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><SPAN style="mso-list: ignore">-<SPAN
style='FONT: 7pt "Times New Roman"'>
</SPAN></SPAN></SPAN><SPAN dir=ltr></SPAN><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d">4<SUP>th</SUP> paragraph under 2. : replace capital 'M'
of 'ICG Members' with small 'm' for consistency<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoListParagraph style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoListParagraph
style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal; TEXT-INDENT: -0.25in; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><SPAN style="mso-list: ignore">-<SPAN
style='FONT: 7pt "Times New Roman"'>
</SPAN></SPAN></SPAN><SPAN dir=ltr></SPAN><SPAN style="COLOR: #1f497d">I've
tried the url at the footnote and it did not work (might be my problem but worth
someone else checking) ..<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><FONT
style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt" color=#ff0000>you’re right re the footnote on page 1.
The document can be found on </FONT><A
title=https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/respectful-communication.pdf
style='href: "https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/respectful-communication.pdf"'
href="https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/respectful-communication.pdf"><FONT
style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"
color=#ff0000>https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/respectful-communication.pdf</FONT></A></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><FONT
size=3></FONT><SPAN style="COLOR: #1f497d"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d">Page 2:<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
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style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal; TEXT-INDENT: -0.25in; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><SPAN style="mso-list: ignore">-<SPAN
style='FONT: 7pt "Times New Roman"'>
</SPAN></SPAN></SPAN><SPAN dir=ltr></SPAN><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d">3<SUP>rd</SUP> paragraph under 3. : </SPAN><SPAN
style='FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman","serif"'>For cases <S>for
which</S> <SPAN style="COLOR: red">where</SPAN> it has been previously agreed
that a decision is to be made at a given meeting and one or more members are not
<S>in a position to attend</S> <SPAN style="COLOR: red">present at</SPAN> that
meeting, these members may provide their views to the ICG in advance in
order that those views be considered at the scheduled meeting<S> for decision
making</S>. Should the decision made not meet the <S>requirements </S><SPAN
style="COLOR: red">views</SPAN> of those absent, there should be another attempt
to find a suitable compromise. Absent members<S> </S>should be invited to
provide the ICG with a written statement of their concerns for inclusion in the
report /conclusions of the ICG.</SPAN><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoListParagraph style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoListParagraph
style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal; TEXT-INDENT: -0.25in; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><SPAN style="mso-list: ignore">-<SPAN
style='FONT: 7pt "Times New Roman"'>
</SPAN></SPAN></SPAN><SPAN dir=ltr></SPAN><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d">4<SUP>th</SUP> paragraph under 3. : I suggest the
deletion of this paragraph as, to me, it is completely redundant to paragraph 3
above .. if it was decided to remain, there's a missing full-stop at the end of
the paragraph ..</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoListParagraph
style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal; TEXT-INDENT: -0.25in; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><FONT color=#ff0000>I’m not sure but think para 3 is
related to absent members who may be opposed whereas para 4 refers to opposed
members in general. Maybe Joe can assist...<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d">I do not dare to suggest any changes on the following
pages </SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: wingdings; COLOR: #1f497d">J</SPAN><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"> ..</SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><FONT color=#ff0000>be courageous if you are not
convinced...<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d">Hope you find the above straight forward non-substantial
changes .. <o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d">Kind Regards<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d">--Manal<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><B><SPAN
style='FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</SPAN></B><SPAN
style='FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Tahoma","sans-serif"'>
internal-cg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org] <B>On
Behalf Of </B>Alissa Cooper<BR><B>Sent:</B> Wednesday, September 17, 2014 2:40
AM<BR><B>To:</B> joseph alhadeff; internal-cg@icann.org<BR><B>Subject:</B> Re:
[Internal-cg] Consensus document - for discussion Sept
17<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P></DIV></DIV>
<P class=MsoNormal><o:p></o:p> </P>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 115%">All,<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P></DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 115%"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P></DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 115%">Attached and in
Dropbox are the versions we will use on the call on Sept
17:<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P></DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 115%"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P></DIV>
<DIV>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 115%">ICG Guidelines for
the Decision Making-v12-MU-ALC-JA-ALC.docx<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P></DIV>
<DIV>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 115%">ICG Guidelines for
the Decision Making-v12-MU-ALC-JA-ALC-clean.docx<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P></DIV>
<DIV>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 115%"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P></DIV>
<DIV>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 115%">All of the changes
since v12-MU-ALC are editorial (mostly typo fixes and white space deletions),
except one: on page 1, I added the text suggested by Joe about public comment
periods. The editorial fixes include the suggestions made by Joe, Wolf-Ulrich,
Kavouss, and Milton (off-list).<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P></DIV></DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 115%"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P></DIV>
<DIV>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 115%">If people spot
further editorial issues prior to the call, please send them in email to the
mailing list, rather than editing the document directly, and I will incorporate
them prior to the call.<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P></DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 115%"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P></DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 115%">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P></DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 115%">Alissa<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P></DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 115%"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P></DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 115%">On 9/16/14, 5:14 AM,
"joseph alhadeff" <<A
href="mailto:joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com">joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com</A>>
wrote:<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P></DIV></DIV>
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style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 115%"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P></DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black">Alissa, Colleagues:<BR><BR>The draft
is acceptable as is - thanks for your work on editing... I have proposed
a few non-substantive edits to improve understanding - for example use of
public comment forum may be read not to include written comments, propose
replacing forum with consultation, etc.<BR><BR>One possible addition might be
a reaffirmation of our commitment to consultation which should be
differentiated from our 7 day period for decisions... Possible language
which could be added to making decisions could be:<BR><BR></SPAN><SPAN
style="COLOR: black">ICG will make all reasonable efforts to enable
member stakeholder communities to have appropriate time to consult with their
members on issues on which the ICG will make substantive decisions.
Where appropriate and practicable, public comment periods will also be
provided</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black">
.<BR><BR>Joe<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black">On 9/16/2014 4:40 AM, Kavouss Arasteh
wrote:<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P></DIV>
<BLOCKQUOTE style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 5pt; MARGIN-TOP: 5pt">
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black">I am at another meeting
<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P></DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black">I have read your edited text
which seems to cover most or almost every
points.<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P></DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black">Please let me to ck it again and
come back to you <o:p></o:p></SPAN></P></DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black">Kavouss
<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P></DIV></BLOCKQUOTE>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: normal"><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black"><o:p></o:p></SPAN> </P></DIV></DIV>
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