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<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:justify;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'>Dear
All ..<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:justify;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:justify;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'>Please
find attached, and in Dropbox, I new version reflecting our discussion on the
call and comments received over email, to the extent possible ..<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:justify;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'>Please
note that I have re-numbered the questions to accommodate the 2 new ones, so
please take care when referring to question numbers as they may not be the same
any more ..<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:justify;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:justify;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'>I
believe the following highlights may be useful in reviewing this version of the
document ..<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:justify;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'>I
can see that the following 2 questions still need further discussion:<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:justify;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'>Q#5
on IANA, with the following suggestions on the table:<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoListParagraph style='mso-margin-top-alt:0in;margin-right:0in;
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text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><![endif]><span dir=LTR></span>A new draft of the question and its
answer <o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoListParagraph style='mso-margin-top-alt:0in;margin-right:0in;
margin-bottom:0in;margin-left:.5in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;text-align:justify;
text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><![endif]><span dir=LTR></span>whether to delete the question<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoListParagraph style='mso-margin-top-alt:0in;margin-right:0in;
margin-bottom:0in;margin-left:.5in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;text-align:justify;
text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><![endif]><span dir=LTR></span>And a range of suggestions
regarding definitions, reference documents, functions within the contract, and
those beyond<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:justify;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'>Q#16
on coordination with accountability process<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoListParagraph style='mso-margin-top-alt:0in;margin-right:0in;
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style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><![endif]><span dir=LTR></span>Redraft of the question<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoListParagraph style='mso-margin-top-alt:0in;margin-right:0in;
margin-bottom:0in;margin-left:.5in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;text-align:justify;
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style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><![endif]><span dir=LTR></span>Concern about <span
style='color:black'>locking our timeline with the results of the ICANN enhanced
accountability process</span><o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoListParagraph style='mso-margin-top-alt:0in;margin-right:0in;
margin-bottom:0in;margin-left:.5in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;text-align:justify;
text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><![endif]><span dir=LTR></span><span style='color:black'>Debate on
</span>ICG will conducting an analysis of their [the received proposals]
overall implications for ICANN accountability &nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:justify;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:justify;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'>On
the other hand, regarding the following 2 additional questions, kindly note
that:<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:justify;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'>Q#3
on ICG secretariat<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoListParagraph style='mso-margin-top-alt:0in;margin-right:0in;
margin-bottom:0in;margin-left:.5in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;text-align:justify;
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style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><![endif]><span dir=LTR></span>I have tried to redraft this one to
focus more on ICG independence<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:justify;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'>Q#11
on submitting individual proposals<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoListParagraph style='mso-margin-top-alt:0in;margin-right:0in;
margin-bottom:0in;margin-left:.5in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;text-align:left;
text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span dir=LTR></span>I have replaced the last sentence
with this: &quot;But, of course, this will be possible only if you have already
participated in the process convened by the relevant operational community.&quot;<span
style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:left;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:left;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'>The
rest of the changes are hopefully straight forward ..<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:left;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'>Appreciate
if you can either use track changes or, like Patrik mentioned, send the exact
text proposed for further iterations ..<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:left;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:left;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'>Kind
Regards <o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-align:left;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed'>--Manal<o:p></o:p></p>

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