<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body dir="auto"><div><div style="direction: ltr;">Thanks Russ, agree with the updated text.</div><div style="text-align: left;direction: ltr; "><div style="text-align: left;direction: ltr; "><br></div><div style="text-align: left;direction: ltr; ">Kind Regards,</div><div style="text-align: left;direction: ltr; ">Mohamed </div></div></div><div><div style="direction: rtl;"><br></div>On 9 Oct 2014, at 20:45, Russ Housley <<a href="mailto:housley@vigilsec.com">housley@vigilsec.com</a>> wrote:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div><span>Here is an update to the timeline document that includes these changes.</span><br><span></span><br><span>Russ</span><br><span></span><br></div></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><div><TimelineDiscussion-v7.docx></div></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><div><span></span><br><span></span><br><span></span><br><span>On Oct 9, 2014, at 10:03 AM, Lynn St.Amour wrote:</span><br><span></span><br><blockquote type="cite"><span>Hi Alissa,</span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span>Various definitions of "submit" say: "given to a person or body for consideration or judgment" or "to give (a document, proposal, piece of writing, etc.) to someone so that it can be considered or approved". </span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span>To make the ICG's intent and responsibility more clear we might say: </span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span>"If no concerns are found, the ICG SENDS the final proposal to ICANN for delivery to NTIA.” </span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span>or </span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span>"If no concerns are found, the ICG's proposal is transmitted to NTIA via ICANN".</span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span>Best,</span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span>Lynn</span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span>On Oct 8, 2014, at 5:39 PM, Alissa Cooper <<a href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in">alissa@cooperw.in</a>> wrote:</span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><blockquote type="cite"><span>Hi all,</span><br></blockquote></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><blockquote type="cite"><span>The folks at NTIA have pointed out to me that as a practical matter and to remain consistent with their procurement rules, ICANN is the entity that needs to submit the final transition proposal to NTIA. If you look at our published timeline, it says the following in step 7:</span><br></blockquote></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><blockquote type="cite"><span>"If no concerns are found, the ICG formally submits the final proposal to NTIA."</span><br></blockquote></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><blockquote type="cite"><span>I suggest that we should update this to say:</span><br></blockquote></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><blockquote type="cite"><span>"If no concerns are found, the ICG formally submits the final proposal to ICANN for delivery to NTIA.”</span><br></blockquote></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><blockquote type="cite"><span>Let me know what you think.</span><br></blockquote></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><blockquote type="cite"><span></span><br></blockquote></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><blockquote type="cite"><span>Thanks,</span><br></blockquote></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><blockquote type="cite"><span>Alissa</span><br></blockquote></blockquote><span></span><br></div></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><div><span>_______________________________________________</span><br><span>Internal-cg mailing list</span><br><span><a href="mailto:Internal-cg@icann.org">Internal-cg@icann.org</a></span><br><span><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg</a></span><br></div></blockquote></body></html>