<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=UTF-8"></head><body ><div><div></div><div>+1@ Narelle and Lynn.</div><div>Mary Uduma</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><div style="font-size:75%;color:#575757">Sent from Samsung Mobile</div></div></div><br><br><br>-------- Original message --------<br>From: Narelle Clark <narelle.clark@accan.org.au> <br>Date: 09/10/2014 19:47 (GMT-05:00) <br>To: "Lynn St.Amour" <Lynn@lstamour.org>,Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> <br>Cc: ICG <internal-cg@icann.org> <br>Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Minor issue with timeline language <br> <br><br>Lynn's first revised wording is better, and I prefer a clearer statement that this is a piece compiled by the ICG through the community, independent of ICANN, and delivered, unchanged to the NTIA.<br><br>Narelle<br><br>> -----Original Message-----<br>> From: internal-cg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org]<br>> On Behalf Of Lynn St.Amour<br>> Sent: Friday, 10 October 2014 1:04 AM<br>> To: Alissa Cooper<br>> Cc: ICG<br>> Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Minor issue with timeline language<br>> <br>> Hi Alissa,<br>> <br>> Various definitions of "submit" say: "given to a person or body for consideration<br>> or judgment" or "to give (a document, proposal, piece of writing, etc.) to<br>> someone so that it can be considered or approved".<br>> <br>> To make the ICG's intent and responsibility more clear we might say:<br>> <br>> "If no concerns are found, the ICG SENDS the final proposal to ICANN for<br>> delivery to NTIA."<br>> <br>> or<br>> <br>> "If no concerns are found, the ICG's proposal is transmitted to NTIA via ICANN".<br>> <br>> <br>> Best,<br>> Lynn<br>> <br>> <br>> <br>> <br>> On Oct 8, 2014, at 5:39 PM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:<br>> <br>> > Hi all,<br>> ><br>> > The folks at NTIA have pointed out to me that as a practical matter and to<br>> remain consistent with their procurement rules, ICANN is the entity that needs<br>> to submit the final transition proposal to NTIA. If you look at our published<br>> timeline, it says the following in step 7:<br>> ><br>> > "If no concerns are found, the ICG formally submits the final proposal to<br>> NTIA."<br>> ><br>> > I suggest that we should update this to say:<br>> ><br>> > "If no concerns are found, the ICG formally submits the final proposal to<br>> ICANN for delivery to NTIA."<br>> ><br>> > Let me know what you think.<br>> ><br>> > Thanks,<br>> > Alissa<br>> > _______________________________________________<br>> > Internal-cg mailing list<br>> > Internal-cg@icann.org<br>> > https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg<br>> <br>> _______________________________________________<br>> Internal-cg mailing list<br>> Internal-cg@icann.org<br>> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg<br>_______________________________________________<br>Internal-cg mailing list<br>Internal-cg@icann.org<br>https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg<br></body>