<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;"><div><div></div><br><blockquote type="cite"><br>I’ve highlighted these additions in yellow, to distinguish them from other edits.<br><br>(and these are open to discussion of course).<br><br>Thanks,<br><br>Paul.<br><br><span><proposal-finalization-process-v3-pw.docx></span><br><br>________________________________________________________________________<br>Paul Wilson, Director-General, APNIC <<a href="mailto:dg@apnic.net">dg@apnic.net</a>><br><a href="http://www.apnic.net">http://www.apnic.net</a> +61 7 3858 3100<br><br><br><br>On 5 Nov 2014, at 4:11 am, Alissa Cooper <<a href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in">alissa@cooperw.in</a>> wrote:<br><br><blockquote type="cite">Attached and in Dropbox is an updated version of the proposal finalization process document. Joe did the heavy lifting to incorporate edits based on our discussion in LA. I have also incorporate the appropriate section of Lynn’s text concerning the role of ICANN in the submission process. However, I think the full list of Lynn’s bullets belong in a separate statement that is specifically about expectations concerning ICANN/ICANN Board/NTIA participation during the entire transition plan development process. I think the attached document should remain focused on proposal finalization, and ultimately the content of section 4 should directly reflect the appropriate portion of whatever final content emerges from the thread that Lynn started.<br><br>Feedback is of course welcome, and there are a few comments in the document from Joe and myself that are worth discussion. I have attached a clean copy; a redlined version is also available in Dropbox.<br><br>Thanks,<br>Alissa<br><br><proposal-finalization-process-v3.docx>_______________________________________________<br>Internal-cg mailing list<br><a href="mailto:Internal-cg@icann.org">Internal-cg@icann.org</a><br>https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/internal-cg<br></blockquote><br></blockquote></div><br></body></html>