<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;"><div></div><br><div><div>On Dec 11, 2014, at 9:13 AM, Alissa Cooper <<a href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in">alissa@cooperw.in</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;"><br><div style=""><br><div>Begin forwarded message:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><div style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px;"><span style="font-family: Helvetica;"><b>From: </b></span><span style="font-family:'Helvetica';">Kavouss Arasteh <<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>><br></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px;"><span style="font-family: Helvetica;"><b>Subject: </b></span><span style="font-family:'Helvetica';"><b>Fwd: [Internal-cg] Proposal finalization process, post-call</b><br></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px;"><span style="font-family: Helvetica;"><b>Date: </b></span><span style="font-family:'Helvetica';">December 11, 2014 at 9:08:00 AM PST<br></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px;"><span style="font-family: Helvetica;"><b>To: </b></span><span style="font-family:'Helvetica';">Alissa Cooper <<a href="mailto:alissa@cooperw.in">alissa@cooperw.in</a>><br></span></div><br><div><div dir="ltr"><div>Please find attached my comments </div><div>Kavouss </div><div>Pls send it to others as I failed to do that </div><div>Kavouss <br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2014-12-11 17:11 GMT+01:00 Daniel Karrenberg <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net" target="_blank">daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;padding-left:1ex;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid"><br>
Language in section 5 now addresses all concerns I have raised.<br>
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The rest of the document now looks reasonable as well. I agree with the new intro, even in the light of my 'ceterum censeo'. ;-)<br>
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Thank you Alissa.<span><font color="#888888"><br>
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Daniel</font></span><div><br>
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