<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;"><div>Hi Manal,</div><div><br></div><div>Thanks for doing this. I have attached suggested edits. Overall I agree with the direction but I think we can simplify this a bit further. Also, as discussed on the call, I think that when we forward the comments to the communities, we should not necessarily seek a response before deciding as the ICG whether we require a response from the community to specific questions that the comments raise. </div><div><br></div><div>Alissa</div><div><br></div><div><a href="https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/Community comment handling">https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/Community%20comment%20handling</a></div><div><br></div><div></div></body></html>