<div dir="ltr"><div>Dear Manal,</div><div>Thank you very much for the good work that was done.</div><div>I was identified to be part of small group on the matter.</div><div>There are some inconsistencies that I HAVE EDITED.</div><div>Moreover, there are overlapping and superflous paragraphs that while is harmless but do not seem necessary.</div><div>However, I have not touched that .</div><div>See attachment with revision marks </div><div>Regards</div><div>Kavouss </div><div><br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2015-02-22 16:28 GMT+01:00 Manal Ismail <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:manal@tra.gov.eg" target="_blank">manal@tra.gov.eg</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Many thanks Daniel for your response and your cooperation ..<br>
In case of no other comments, appreciate if our chair and co-chairs can<br>
put this into action ..<br>
<br>
Kind Regards<br>
<span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888">--Manal<br>
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-----Original Message-----<br>
From: Daniel Karrenberg [mailto:<a href="mailto:daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net">daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net</a>]<br>
Sent: Friday, February 20, 2015 2:23 PM<br>
To: Manal Ismail; <a href="mailto:internal-cg@icann.org">internal-cg@icann.org</a><br>
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Steps for handling ICG forum comments ..<br>
<br>
On 17.02.15 13:06 , Manal Ismail wrote:<br>
> Dear All ..<br>
><br>
> Please find attached stepsfor handling community comments received on<br>
> ICG Forum..<br>
><br>
> I hope this accuratelyreflectsthe discussion we had in Singapore ..<br>
><br>
> I have createda new document as it describes a different approach and<br>
> was too messy intrack changes ..<br>
><br>
> The old draft is still on Dropbox, if you wishto reference..<br>
><br>
> I have to clarify that this has not been discussed yet among the<br>
> smaller group agreed in Singapore, but is being shared for the sake of<br>
time ..<br>
><br>
> Hope to have this settled soon ..<br>
><br>
> Kind Regards<br>
><br>
> --Manal<br>
<br>
<br>
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Manal,<br>
<br>
<br>
thank you very much for driving this along.<br>
<br>
"Handling community comments submitted to the ICG Forum Discussion Draft<br>
based on Singapore Meeting<br>
11 February 2015 - V.1"<br>
<br>
is excellent and I recommend that we adopt it.<br>
<br>
Daniel<br>
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