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<div dir="auto">Hi Dennis,

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<div dir="auto">Thanks for sharing the file. I’ll think about a different wording but anyone is welcome to suggest something.</div>

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<div dir="auto">Best,<br />

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Meikal</div>

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<div name="messageReplySection">Am 4. Okt. 2019, 18:53 +0200 schrieb Tan Tanaka, Dennis <dtantanaka@verisign.com>:<br />

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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Meikal,</span></p>

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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Here is the revised version of the document</span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Asf9ecnyX4rkK3pyQMzDuH8YY5-eXw8quZ6guDiUmqY/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Asf9ecnyX4rkK3pyQMzDuH8YY5-eXw8quZ6guDiUmqY/edit?usp=sharing</a></span></p>

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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Could you (and others too) review the highlighted section? I think it could be re-worded better (or remove altogether because it doesn’t make sense to me).</span></p>

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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thanks,<br />

Dennis</span></p>

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