[Neobrahmigp] Gurmukhi LGR v2.5 date 20 feb 2019

Tue Feb 19 17:00:20 UTC 2019

Dear NBGP members,

Please find attached the Gurmukhi LGR version 2.5. The proposal was updated by Prof. Lehal to incorporate IP feedback. The XML was updated accordingly.

The file names are updated and the date is set at 20 Feb 2019 to get ready for the publishing. This is for your information.

This package is being forward to the IP.

Regards,
Pitinan

From: "Dr. G. S. Lehal (ਗੁਰਪ੍ਰੀਤ ਸਿੰਘ ਲਹਿਲ)" <gslehal at gmail.com>
Date: Thursday, January 31, 2019 at 16:50
To: Pitinan Kooarmornpatana <pitinan.koo at icann.org>
Subject: [Ext] Re: FW: [Neobrahmigp] IP review of Gurmukhi LGR proposal v2.5

Hello,
Please find the proposal attached after making the necessary changes.

Thanks

On Wed, Jan 30, 2019 at 3:53 PM Pitinan Kooarmornpatana <pitinan.koo at icann.org<mailto:pitinan.koo at icann.org>> wrote:
Dear Dr. Lehal,

Please find attached the IP feedback and also there is some feedback in the message below.
 Next steps are

  1.  Finalize the Proposal (only .docx) and share to NBGP
  2.  I will upload the updated proposal to the ICANN org website, to get the final URL of the document.
  3.  Update the XML to add the URL of the supporting document.
  4.  Submit everything to the IP for the final check

For now, kindly proceed step 1. If I could be of any help please let me know.

Regards,
Pitinan

From: Neobrahmigp <neobrahmigp-bounces at icann.org<mailto:neobrahmigp-bounces at icann.org>> on behalf of Sarmad Hussain <sarmad.hussain at icann.org<mailto:sarmad.hussain at icann.org>>
Date: Friday, January 11, 2019 at 10:02
To: "Dr. G. S. Lehal (ਗੁਰਪ੍ਰੀਤ ਸਿੰਘ ਲਹਿਲ)" <gslehal at gmail.com<mailto:gslehal at gmail.com>>, "`neobrahmigp at icann.org<mailto:neobrahmigp at icann.org>`" <Neobrahmigp at icann.org<mailto:Neobrahmigp at icann.org>>
Subject: [Neobrahmigp] IP review of Gurmukhi LGR proposal v2.5

Dear Prof. Lehal, NBGP members,

IP has reviewed and shared their final feedback below and as attached.  They have suggested some editorial changes.

May we request you to please carefully review and incorporate the feedback and share the final version of the Gurmukhi LGR proposal.

Once you share the version:

  1.  it will be published at the ICANN website as the final version of Gurmukhi LGR proposal from NBGP, after incorporating the public comments, and
  2.  it will be submitted to IP for their formal review

These are the next steps towards approval and integration of the work into the RZ-LGR.

Regards

Sarmad

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To NeoB-GP (Gurmukhi)
From IP

The IP has reviewed the post-public comment version of the Gurmukhi LGR and notes a few final editorial issues noted in the attached document and in the text below.

Some additional mechanical testing has been performed and no issues found.
The dispositions of comments have been reviewed; the IP feels that these should be formally published to provide a track record of the GP's processing of public comments, especially for comments that resulted in no change to the LGR.
As a result of this review, the IP is looking forward to the submission of a finalized Gurmukhi LGR proposal for formal review and approval as part of the integrated Root Zone LGR.

Document:
Editorial issues noted in attached document "Gurmukhi-LGR-20181206-IP-review.docx" (see change tracking and sidebar comments)
TXT file:
No issues
XML file:
(1) On line 138 in the XML file, the <dd> entry for [Proposal] contains no title or URL and date for the final published proposal document. We expect that this will be replaced by the actual data as part of publication.
(2) The "Overview" section (lines 12ff) contains the wrong document title. The correct title is "Proposal for a Gurmukhi Script Root Zone Label Generation Ruleset (LGR)"

(3) The section on variants (line 32ff) contains language that is cloned from Devanagari but does not apply to  the specifics of the Gurmukhi LGR, because unlike Devanagari, no in-script variants are defined, and therefore "deviation from normally perceived character formation" dos not apply. The following change is suggested.

Old:

    <p>According to Section 6, "Variants", in "[Proposal]", this LGR defines variants which are
    "Confusing due to deviation from normally perceived character formations by larger linguistic
    community". These cases are not of mere visual similarity; they can cause confusion even to a
    careful observer and hence have been defined as variants. In addition to these, NBGP also did
    cross-script variant analysis among all the scripts under NBGP ambit. Gurmukhi and Devanagari
    scripts are closely related to each other and there are many characters in both scripts, which
    can be confused with the  characters in other script.</p>

New (suggested):

    <p>The Gurmukhi and Devanagari scripts are closely related to each other and there are many
    code points in both scripts which  can be confused with code points in the other script. Additional
    cross-script variant analysis identified a smaller set of code points from the Bengali script. Where these
    can cause confusion even to a careful observer, they have been defined as variants. See Section 6,
    "Variants", in [Proposal].</p>

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Dr. Gurpreet Singh Lehal,
Professor, Department of Computer Science
Dean, Faculty of Computing Sciences
Director,  Research Centre for Punjabi Language Technology,
Punjabi University, Patiala.
India-147002

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