[Neobrahmigp] Kannada LGR v2.5 dated 20 Feb 2019

Wed Feb 20 08:19:31 UTC 2019

Dear NBGP members,

Please find attached the Kannada LGR package version 2.5 dated 20 February 2019 for your information.
We have incorporated IP editorial suggestions as Pavanaja’s request and update the detail in XML.

File names and the date also update to be ready for publishing. Please see tracked changes in the redline version.
This package is being forward to the IP.

In addition, kindly also review and finalize the suggested text for response to public comment for Kannada on item 3.4.7 (2 times) and 5.3 at page 4,5, in the Google doc.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m9MbBfNBQZAFc9SOYpt0lgeeyM3N-DsUP173J4Vb948.

Regards,
Pitinan

From: Neobrahmigp <neobrahmigp-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Sarmad Hussain <sarmad.hussain at icann.org>
Date: Tuesday, January 22, 2019 at 14:47
To: "pavanaja at vishvakannada.com" <pavanaja at vishvakannada.com>
Cc: "neobrahmigp at icann.org" <neobrahmigp at icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Neobrahmigp] [Ext] RE: IP review of Kannada LGR Proposal version proposal ver. 2.4

Dear Pavanaja,

The IP has suggested some edits inline in the text in the update version attached.  There are no additional comments in the proposal file.

Regards,
Sarmad

From: pavanaja at vishvakannada.com <pavanaja at vishvakannada.com>
Sent: Tuesday, January 22, 2019 10:06 AM
To: Sarmad Hussain <sarmad.hussain at icann.org>
Cc: neobrahmigp at icann.org; lakshmikt96 at gmail.com
Subject: [Ext] RE: IP review of Kannada LGR Proposal version proposal ver. 2.4

Dear Dr Sarmad Hussain,

I did not find any comment by IP in the attached doc. Where are they?

Thanks and regards,
Pavanaja

From: Sarmad Hussain <sarmad.hussain at icann.org<mailto:sarmad.hussain at icann.org>>
Sent: Tuesday, January 22, 2019 7:43 AM
To: Dr.U.B. Pavanaja <pavanaja at vishvakannada.com<mailto:pavanaja at vishvakannada.com>>; `neobrahmigp at icann.org` <neobrahmigp at icann.org<mailto:neobrahmigp at icann.org>>; pavanaja at gmail.com<mailto:pavanaja at gmail.com>; lakshmikt96 at gmail.com<mailto:lakshmikt96 at gmail.com>
Subject: IP review of Kannada LGR Proposal version proposal ver. 2.4

Dear Pavanaja, Dhanalakshmi, NBGP members,

Please find attached the review of the Kannada LGR proposal, which included the following documents, by the IP.

  1.  LGR Proposal in Word Document (LGR-Proposal_Kannada_20181204.docx)
  2.  LGR Proposal in XML (proposal-lgr-knda_20181129.xml)
  3.  LGR Proposal in HTML (Proposal-Lgr-Knda_20181129.htm)
  4.  Test labels (Kannada-test-Labels-20181129.txt)
  5.  Test label results (Kannada-test-Labels-20181129-Result.txt)

An annotated file is attached with IP comments with additional comments below.

Please let us know if you have any queries.  We look forward to your final review.

Regards,
Sarmad
________________________________

To: Neo-Brahmi Generation Panel
From: Integration Panel

The IP has reviewed the 20181204 version of the Kannada LGR proposal.

Findings: the main technical change, removal of cross-script variants with Sinhala has been carried out without regression.

Some minor issues found:

DOCX

(1) There are a number of editorial issues, mostly copy-editing; they have been collected as tracked changes in the attached document (LGR-Proposal_Kannada_20181204_IP_review.docx).

The IP requests the GP to review these and either accept them or make other appropriate edits.

XML

(X11) The XML would need one [TBD] filled: All proposals need their final URL and DATE added where the XML has "[TBD URL and Date]" (this shows in RED in the HTML view as generated by the IP's tool).

TXT

The supplied test labels have been verified.

The IP also reviewed the disposition of comments found in
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m9MbBfNBQZAFc9SOYpt0lgeeyM3N-DsUP173J4Vb948/edit# [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1CLKdJBTNDcC-5FsFFs5s0a-5FBk0zQUER2BIruYuyCNgkAw_edit-23&d=DwMCaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=KTETvEaGPwPcawI-QmNa-kiv-ZBvdgyyLm-mxd028M4&m=eyDlRBk8coXQi8Lyt2-J-3YhqqSapAKSwfsjyT-cFvc&s=hG0TluIQ1zEUbPBjnmeO93Cj3gd19oTZ9qJlq_dTj5o&e=>
in which the GP notes the conclusion that no further actions are contemplated by the GP and gives a reason for that decision, except for three comments related to 3.4.7 (twice) and 5.3 (once). The IP does not suggest that these comments require changes in the proposal, but that the GP should document explicitly that no action was taken. (In some cases, the IP finds the comments unclear)

It is assumed by the IP that this document, with the noted omissions fixed, or something substantially similar will be made public as part of the response to Public Comments.
Conclusion
The IP requests the GP to address the identified editorial issues before finalizing the submission.
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