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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext">Dear Dr. Lehal, <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext">As discussed, kindly find the draft of the updated Gurmukhi Proposal for your finalization.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext">Edit notes for Gurmukhi-LGR-20180521_PK.docx<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext">  1. Add Devanagari Nukta and Gurmukhi Nukta as cross-script variant<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext">  2. Edit WLE Rule#7 as suggested by the IP
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext">  3. Add two paragraph regards to ZWNJ/ZWJ in section 3.3.8 and 4.1.1.ii
<i>which the sample in Gurmukhi is still need to be added</i><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext">  4. In corporate other IP edit suggestions in the file<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext">Edit notes for Gurmukhi_test_label_20180521.txt
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  1. Combine all 4 test files (valid/invalid/cross-script/excluded codepoint) into one file with 4 sections
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext">Edit notes for Response of IP to-Gurmukhi-LGR-20180430_IP_PK.docx<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext">  1. I add responses to the last column. Kindy review.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext">Please review and let us know any feedback. Once the .doc version is finalized, we will update the XML accordingly.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext">Pitinan<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:windowtext"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Neobrahmigp <neobrahmigp-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Sarmad Hussain <sarmad.hussain@icann.org><br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, May 17, 2018 at 10:19<br>
<b>To: </b>"Dr. G. S. Lehal (</span><span lang="PA" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial Unicode MS",sans-serif">ਗੁਰਪ੍ਰੀਤ ਸਿੰਘ ਲਹਿਲ)</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt">" <gslehal@gmail.com><br>
<b>Cc: </b>neo brahmi <neobrahmigp@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Neobrahmigp] Gurmukhi-LGR-20180430 - IP Feedback<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><a name="_MailOriginalBody">Dear Dr. Lehal,<o:p></o:p></a></p>
<p><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Thank you for sharing the updated version of the Gurmukhi LGR proposal.  The IP has reviewed the Proposal, XML and Test labels.  The proposal is now in final stage.  IP has suggested some edits in the proposal
 document, and provided some feedback in a separate document.  For example, they note that use of 0A3C with at least one code point can form variant sequence with a Devanagari sequence, when the latter uses 093C - this sequence needs to be tabulated in the
 variant list.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Here is the IP response to Gurmukhi with associated files. Attached  are the following 3 files:
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<span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">IP response document<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Fully change tracked DOCX containing detailed editing suggestions
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<span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">XML file with corrections and suggested edits applied (no change tracking, must use diff)<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Please let us know if you have any queries. 
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Regards,<br>
Sarmad<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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