<div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr">Dear all,<div><br></div><div>I have amended <span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif">page no 09 </span><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif">after the first para in section 4, of </span>Oriya LGR Proposal document version 2.11 as per the email on 02-02-2019 by Dr Sarmad in the document attached. </div><div><br></div><div><b><u><i>Quote</i></u></b></div><div>The Oriya (Odia) script LGR proposal was published for public comment to allow those who had not participated in the NBGP to make their views known. The NBGP analyzed all comments received to finalize the proposal. The analysis of public comments can be accessed online given at [106].<br></div><div><b><u><i>Unquote</i></u></b>  <br></div><div><br></div><div>Kindly use this document attached for your further reference.</div><div><br></div><div>Best Regards</div><div>Kuldeep Patnaik</div></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Mon, Feb 11, 2019 at 6:42 PM Kuldeep Patnaik <<a href="mailto:kuldeep.patnaik3@gmail.com">kuldeep.patnaik3@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;margin:0in 0in 10pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:12pt">Dear all,</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;margin:0in 0in 10pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:12pt">After reviewing the feedback from IP, the LGR proposal for Oriya has been updated with the action points which are mentioned below.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;margin:0in 0in 10pt"><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:12pt">The document </span><font face="Arial, sans-serif" color="#0000ff"><span style="font-size:16px">Proposal-Oriya-LGR-20190211_Doc Ver 2.11.doc </span></font> <span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px">and</span> <span style="color:rgb(0,0,255);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px">Proposal-Oriya-LGR-20190211_Doc Ver 2.11.pdf</span><font face="Arial, sans-serif" color="#0000ff"><span style="font-size:16px"> </span></font><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:12pt">is now renamed as version 2.11 is attached in this email. </span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;margin:0in 0in 10pt"><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:12pt"><br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;margin:0in 0in 10pt"><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:12pt"><b>IP Feedback:</b> (1) The .docx proposal would still benefit if the citation of specific characters would</span><b style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:12pt"><i> as much as possible </i></b><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:12pt">include the code point, glyph and character name (especially, for example, in 3.6, 3.7, 3.8 and 3.9). This would make it much more easily read by non-Oriya reading people.</span><br></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;margin:0in 0in 10pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b style="color:rgb(58,35,195);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px">Action Taken: </b><span style="color:rgb(58,35,195);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:12pt">Updated the proposal with code point, glyph and character name as much as possible (especially, for example, in 3.5, 3.6, 3.7, 3.8 and 3.9).  </span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;margin:0in 0in 10pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px">IP Feedback:</b><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px"> </span><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:12pt;text-indent:0in">(2)There is a missing space in the heading "10.3 </span><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:12pt;text-indent:0in">Oriyaand Telugu".</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;margin:0in 0in 10pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(58,35,195);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:12pt;text-indent:0in"><b>Action Taken:</b> Updated a space in the heading "10.3 Oriya and Telugu". This seems a technical issue. While converting from word to PDF, sometimes spaces between words are not embedded in PDF version.  </span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 10pt 0.5in;line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif"></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;margin:0in 0in 10pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px">IP Feedback:</b><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif">This and many other instances of missing spaces and small copy edits have been addressed by the suggested edits in the attached document. The GP is encouraged to review and accept these or make additional changes.</span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;margin:0in 0in 10pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b style="color:rgb(58,35,195);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px">Action Taken: </b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:rgb(58,35,195)">Updated missing spaces and small copy edits have been addressed.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;margin:0in 0in 10pt;font-size:11pt"><b style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px">IP Feedback:</b><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt"><font face="arial, helvetica, sans-serif">(3)The discussion of variants vs. confusables could use some small edits to align better with the terminology and explanation used across the Root Zone LGR. (See attached document).</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;margin:0in 0in 10pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b style="color:rgb(58,35,195);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px">Action Taken: </b><span style="color:rgb(58,35,195);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:12pt">Accepted the small edits suggestion by IP.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;margin:0in 0in 10pt;font-size:11pt"><b style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px">IP Feedback:</b><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt"><font face="arial, helvetica, sans-serif">(4)Halant should be capitalized to match usage elsewhere. (See attached document).</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;margin:0in 0in 10pt;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b style="color:rgb(58,35,195);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px">Action Taken: </b><span style="color:rgb(58,35,195);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:12pt">The LGR is now updated capitalized “H” in Halant.</span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;font-size:11pt"><b style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px">IP Feedback:</b><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px"> </span><font face="arial, helvetica, sans-serif"><span style="font-size:12pt">(5) Page 12, the fourth page of the Public Comments Feedback for  ... Oriya, claims (in 3.4 and 3.6) that ISO 15919 is to be used for lossless transliteration of the characters, but in </span>fact<span style="font-size:12pt"> the IPA seems to be used everywhere for phonetic renderings, thus, for example, using j rather than y.</span></font><br></p>

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">The label file has been verified.</span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:rgb(58,35,195)">No Action required</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:rgb(58,35,195)"><br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial"><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px"><br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial"><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px">Further, I have added the following text after the first para in section 4, as per the email from Dr Sarmad d<u>ated</u> 02-Feb-2019, s<u>ubject</u>:  </span><font face="Arial, sans-serif"><span style="font-size:16px">Proposed text for NBGP methodology after public comment (refer page no 09 and page no 31)</span></font><br></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial"><font face="Arial, sans-serif"><span style="font-size:16px"><br></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial"><font face="Arial, sans-serif"><span style="font-size:16px"><font color="#0000ff">The Oriya script LGR proposal was published for public comment to allow those who had not participated in the NBGP to make their views known. The NBGP analyzed all comments received to finalize the proposal. The analysis of public comments can be accessed online given at [106].</font></span><br></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial"><font face="Arial, sans-serif"><span style="font-size:16px"><br></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial"><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px">Best Regards</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial"><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:16px">Kuldeep Patnaik</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;line-height:normal;background-image:initial;background-position:initial;background-size:initial;background-repeat:initial;background-origin:initial;background-clip:initial"><font face="Arial, sans-serif"><span style="font-size:16px"><br></span></font></p></div></div></div></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Wed, Feb 6, 2019 at 2:20 PM Kuldeep Patnaik <<a href="mailto:kuldeep.patnaik3@gmail.com" target="_blank">kuldeep.patnaik3@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr">Thank you Dr Sarmad,<div>I will revert to you soon.</div><div><br></div><div>Best Regards</div><div>Kuldeep Patnaik</div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Wed, Feb 6, 2019 at 8:45 AM Sarmad Hussain <<a href="mailto:sarmad.hussain@icann.org" target="_blank">sarmad.hussain@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div bgcolor="white" lang="EN-US"><div class="gmail-m_3990023187913402624gmail-m_-2311566121621537628gmail-m_4172743140822649267gmail-m_2192746840124976642WordSection1"><p class="gmail-m_3990023187913402624gmail-m_-2311566121621537628gmail-m_4172743140822649267gmail-m_21927468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