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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear NBGP members, <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please find attached the Oriya LGR package version 2.11, dated 20 February 2019.
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<p class="MsoNormal">This is for your information. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Based on Kuldeep’s submission. The file names and the date has been updated to get ready for publishing. The version of the word document is also update to .docx to fix some of the formatting issue. Please see the redline version for track
change, and the pdf version for the final formatting.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">This package is being forward to the IP. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Pitinan<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Kuldeep Patnaik <kuldeep.patnaik3@gmail.com><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, February 12, 2019 at 00:21<br>
<b>To: </b>Sarmad Hussain <sarmad.hussain@icann.org>, Pitinan Kooarmornpatana <pitinan.koo@icann.org><br>
<b>Cc: </b>"Neobrahmigp@icann.org" <Neobrahmigp@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Ext] Re: IP review of Oriya LGR 20181220<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I have amended <span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">page no 09 after the first para in section 4, of </span>Oriya LGR Proposal document version 2.11 as per the email on 02-02-2019 by Dr Sarmad in the document attached. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The Oriya (Odia) script LGR proposal was published for public comment to allow those who had not participated in the NBGP to make their views known. The NBGP analyzed all comments received to finalize the proposal. The analysis of public
comments can be accessed online given at [106].<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Kindly use this document attached for your further reference.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Best Regards<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Kuldeep Patnaik<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Mon, Feb 11, 2019 at 6:42 PM Kuldeep Patnaik <<a href="mailto:kuldeep.patnaik3@gmail.com">kuldeep.patnaik3@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Dear all,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">After reviewing the feedback from IP, the LGR proposal for Oriya has been updated with the action points which are mentioned below.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">The document <span style="color:blue">Proposal-Oriya-LGR-20190211_Doc Ver 2.11.doc </span></span>
<span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">and</span> <span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:blue">Proposal-Oriya-LGR-20190211_Doc Ver 2.11.pdf </span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">is
now renamed as version 2.11 is attached in this email. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">IP Feedback:</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"> (1) The .docx proposal would still benefit if the citation of specific characters would<b><i> as much as possible </i></b>include
the code point, glyph and character name (especially, for example, in 3.6, 3.7, 3.8 and 3.9). This would make it much more easily read by non-Oriya reading people.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#3A23C3">Action Taken: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#3A23C3">Updated the proposal with code point, glyph and character name as much as possible
(especially, for example, in 3.5, 3.6, 3.7, 3.8 and 3.9). </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">IP Feedback:</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"> (2)There is a missing space in the heading "10.3 Oriyaand Telugu".</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#3A23C3">Action Taken:</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#3A23C3"> Updated a space in the heading "10.3 Oriya and Telugu". This seems a technical
issue. While converting from word to PDF, sometimes spaces between words are not embedded in PDF version. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">IP Feedback:</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"> This and many other instances of missing spaces and small copy edits have been addressed by the suggested
edits in the attached document. The GP is encouraged to review and accept these or make additional changes.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#3A23C3">Action Taken: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#3A23C3">Updated missing spaces and small copy edits have been addressed.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">IP Feedback:</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"> (3)The discussion of variants vs. confusables could use some small edits to align better with the terminology
and explanation used across the Root Zone LGR. (See attached document).</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#3A23C3">Action Taken: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#3A23C3">Accepted the small edits suggestion by IP.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">IP Feedback:</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"> (4)Halant should be capitalized to match usage elsewhere. (See attached document).</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#3A23C3">Action Taken: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#3A23C3">The LGR is now updated capitalized “H” in Halant.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">IP Feedback:</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"> (5) Page 12, the fourth page of the Public Comments Feedback for ... Oriya, claims (in 3.4 and 3.6) that
ISO 15919 is to be used for lossless transliteration of the characters, but in </span><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">fact</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"> the IPA seems to be used everywhere for phonetic renderings,
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<b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#3A23C3">Action Taken: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#3A23C3">ISO 15919 system is not used for transliteration of any scripts in LGR proposal
of NBGP for this purpose. Hence, the <a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1m9MbBfNBQZAFc9SOYpt0lgeeyM3N-2DDsUP173J4Vb948_edit&d=DwMFaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=qAs-z5lsx1qg4ORlIggZJ8rKxoygReIR_xCeVaO37qo&m=8TO6dSUXPj2h48gOf3Suk13ehrj77DkR0dFLVtiUwBA&s=5iza2LdsgrrY0gq0fOlc7WHxpHKhkLXDh_9Lbz0PFxw&e=" target="_blank">
public comments feedback doc [docs.google.com]</a> for Oriya (Odia) script is also updated to avoid such confusion going forward regarding ISO15919 system for transliteration of Oriya (Odia).</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">The updated XML passes our tool</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Further, I have added the following text after the first para in section 4, as per the email from Dr Sarmad d<u>ated</u> 02-Feb-2019, s<u>ubject</u>: Proposed text for NBGP methodology after public
comment (refer page no 09 and page no 31)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:blue">The Oriya script LGR proposal was published for public comment to allow those who had not participated in the NBGP to make their views known. The NBGP analyzed all comments received to
finalize the proposal. The analysis of public comments can be accessed online given at [106].</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Best Regards</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Kuldeep Patnaik</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Wed, Feb 6, 2019 at 2:20 PM Kuldeep Patnaik <<a href="mailto:kuldeep.patnaik3@gmail.com" target="_blank">kuldeep.patnaik3@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Wed, Feb 6, 2019 at 8:45 AM Sarmad Hussain <<a href="mailto:sarmad.hussain@icann.org" target="_blank">sarmad.hussain@icann.org</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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Dear Kuldeep, all,<o:p></o:p></p>
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Please find below (and attached) the review of the proposal by IP. Kindly let us know if you have any queries.
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We look forward to the final version, incorporating the feedback.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p>To: Neo-Brahmi Generation Panel<br>
From: Integration Panel<br>
Subject: Updated Oriya Proposal dated 20181220<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>The IP has reviewed the updated proposal and has a few additional comments and suggestions as set out below and in the attached document where suggested edits are shown in redline. Once these are reviewed, accepted or altered by the GP, the proposal is ready
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<p>(1) The .docx proposal would still benefit if the citation of specific characters would<b><i> as much as possible
</i></b>include the code point, glyph and character name (especially, for example, in 3.6, 3.7, 3.8 and 3.9). This would make it much more easily read by non-Oriya reading people.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>(2) There is a missing space in the heading "10.3 Oriyaand Telugu".<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>This, and many other instances of missing spaces and small copy edits have been addressed by the suggested edits in the attached document. The GP is encouraged to review and accept these or make additional changes.<o:p></o:p></p>
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