[OFB-WG] [Ext] Re: ACTION: 24 HR comment period 16 November 23:59 UTC - Pilot Holistic Review TOR

[Marita Moll]

I think it fits best as an annex with a short reference to it and its 
relevance in the text.

Marita

On 2023-11-15 8:15 p.m., Bill Jouris via OFB-WG wrote:
> Hi Silvia,
>
> My inclination is to make it an annex.  But I'm open to arguments, if 
> someone here has a different view on the subject.
>
> Bill
>
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>     On Wed, Nov 15, 2023 at 4:07 PM, Silvia Vivanco
>     <silvia.vivanco at icann.org> wrote:
>
>     Dear Bill,
>
>     Do you wish to include the Power point in the same body of the
>     ALAC statement? Or could the PPT sent as an annex to the statement?
>
>     Thank you very much!
>
>     Silvia
>
>     *From: *Bill Jouris <b_jouris at yahoo.com>
>     *Date: *Wednesday, November 15, 2023 at 7:05 PM
>     *To: *OFB-WG <ofb-wg at icann.org>, Silvia Vivanco
>     <silvia.vivanco at icann.org>
>     *Cc: *Jonathan Zuck <jzuck at innovatorsnetwork.org>, Ricardo
>     Holmquist <rihogris at gmail.com>, Cheryl Langdon-Orr
>     <langdonorr at gmail.com>, DANIEL NANGHAKA <dndannang at gmail.com>,
>     Claire Craig <claireccraig at gmail.com>, Vanda Scartezini
>     <vanda at scartezini.org>, "sebastien at bachollet.com"
>     <sebastien at bachollet.com>, At-Large Staff <staff at atlarge.icann.org>
>     *Subject: *[Ext] Re: ACTION: 24 HR comment period 16 November
>     23:59 UTC - Pilot Holistic Review TOR
>
>     As noted in the document, we are looking to attach a PowerPoint. 
>     Once I figure out how to do that.  For your reference, it is
>     attached here.
>
>     Bill Jouris
>
>     On Wednesday, November 15, 2023 at 02:07:17 PM PST, Silvia Vivanco
>     <silvia.vivanco at icann.org> wrote:
>
>     Dear OFB-WG members,
>
>     On behalf ofBill Jouris, penholder for the statement, along
>     withCheryl Langdon-Orr, Vanda Scartezini, Daniel
>     Nanghaka,andSebastian Bachollet, please find the link to the final
>     draft of theALACStatement onthe PilotHolistic Review Revised Draft
>     Terms of
>     Referenceat:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GNGOv6wyAi9shj8hLwisJ2fcelGduDDYIj3EYD75SpM/edit
>     [docs.google.com]
>     <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1GNGOv6wyAi9shj8hLwisJ2fcelGduDDYIj3EYD75SpM/edit__;!!PtGJab4!4I0Emc1v1tqteSvIfEawvPD34KpXX4PuyU1mmHlAmGRRyB580_kCMcSlfxQaKcSykFRiBUltsyixV0FE9t2KHWHR2HU$>.
>
>     There will be a24-hour comment periodclosing tomorrow,*Thursday,
>     16 November, at 23:59 UTC.*
>
>     Please add your comments directly to the Google document.
>
>     Kind regards,
>
>     Silvia
>
>     Silvia Vivanco
>
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