[OFB-WG] [Ext] Re: ACTION: 24 HR comment period 16 November 23:59 UTC - Pilot Holistic Review TOR- APPROVAL and closing document

[Bill Jouris]

Hi Silvia, 
It looks pretty good to me.  My only note would be that the Appendix cites Sebastian's presentation, but appears not to have a link to it. 
Please express my thanks to whoever added the initial boilerplate. 
Bill Jouris  

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  On Thu, Nov 16, 2023 at 4:28 PM, Silvia Vivanco<silvia.vivanco at icann.org> wrote:    
Dear all,
 
  
 
Thank you for your edits to the document, with your approval, staff will close the document for edits and will prepare the final submission, including the PPT.
 
  
 
The vote will be launched tomorrow Friday 17 November.
 
  
 
Kind regards,
 
  
 
Silvia
 
  
 
  
 
  
 
From: Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco at icann.org>
Date: Thursday, November 16, 2023 at 10:26 AM
To: Bill Jouris <b_jouris at yahoo.com>, OFB-WG <ofb-wg at icann.org>
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Subject: Re: [Ext] Re: ACTION: 24 HR comment period 16 November 23:59 UTC - Pilot Holistic Review TOR
 
  
 
Dear bill,
 
  
 
Yes, it is easier to send 2 documents and reference the PPT as an Annex.
 
  
 
Thank you very much for your feedback!
 
  
 
Silvia
 
  
 
  
 
From: Bill Jouris <b_jouris at yahoo.com>
Reply-To: Bill Jouris <b_jouris at yahoo.com>
Date: Wednesday, November 15, 2023 at 8:15 PM
To: Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco at icann.org>, OFB-WG <ofb-wg at icann.org>
Cc: Jonathan Zuck <jzuck at innovatorsnetwork.org>, Ricardo Holmquist <rihogris at gmail.com>, Cheryl Langdon-Orr <langdonorr at gmail.com>, DANIEL NANGHAKA <dndannang at gmail.com>, Claire Craig <claireccraig at gmail.com>, Vanda Scartezini <vanda at scartezini.org>, "sebastien at bachollet.com" <sebastien at bachollet.com>, At-Large Staff <staff at atlarge.icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Ext] Re: ACTION: 24 HR comment period 16 November 23:59 UTC - Pilot Holistic Review TOR
 
  
 
Hi Silvia,  
 
  
 
My inclination is to make it an annex.  But I'm open to arguments, if someone here has a different view on the subject. 
 
  
 
Bill 
 
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On Wed, Nov 15, 2023 at 4:07 PM, Silvia Vivanco
 
<silvia.vivanco at icann.org> wrote:
 
Dear Bill,
 
 
 
Do you wish to include the Power point in the same body of the ALAC statement? Or could the PPT sent as an annex to the statement?
 
 
 
Thank you very much!
 
Silvia
 
 
 
From:Bill Jouris <b_jouris at yahoo.com>
Date: Wednesday, November 15, 2023 at 7:05 PM
To: OFB-WG <ofb-wg at icann.org>, Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco at icann.org>
Cc: Jonathan Zuck <jzuck at innovatorsnetwork.org>, Ricardo Holmquist <rihogris at gmail.com>, Cheryl Langdon-Orr <langdonorr at gmail.com>, DANIEL NANGHAKA <dndannang at gmail.com>, Claire Craig <claireccraig at gmail.com>, Vanda Scartezini <vanda at scartezini.org>, "sebastien at bachollet.com" <sebastien at bachollet.com>, At-Large Staff <staff at atlarge.icann.org>
Subject: [Ext] Re: ACTION: 24 HR comment period 16 November 23:59 UTC - Pilot Holistic Review TOR
 
 
 
As noted in the document, we are looking to attach a PowerPoint.  Once I figure out how to do that.  For your reference, it is attached here. 
 
 
 
Bill Jouris 
 
 
 
On Wednesday, November 15, 2023 at 02:07:17 PM PST, Silvia Vivanco <silvia.vivanco at icann.org> wrote:
 
 
 
 
 
Dear OFB-WG members,
 
 
 
On behalf of Bill Jouris, penholder for the statement, along with Cheryl Langdon-Orr, Vanda Scartezini, Daniel Nanghaka, and Sebastian Bachollet, please find the link to the final draft of the ALAC Statement on the Pilot Holistic Review Revised Draft Terms of Reference at:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GNGOv6wyAi9shj8hLwisJ2fcelGduDDYIj3EYD75SpM/edit [docs.google.com].
 
 
 
There will be a 24-hour comment period closing tomorrow, Thursday, 16 November, at 23:59 UTC.
 
 
 
Please add your comments directly to the Google document. 
 
 
 
Kind regards,
 
 
 
Silvia
 
 
 
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