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Thanks very much Volker. <br><br>
Attached please find draft 2, incorporating your feedback below as
redlined edits.<br><br>
I am relaying this redlined draft to the subgroup mailing list to enable
review and discussion.<br><br>
Best, Lisa<br><br>
<br>
At 10:22 AM 4/4/2018, Volker Greimann wrote:<br><br>
<blockquote type=cite class=cite cite="">Hi Lisa, <br><br>
thank you so much for preparing this. <br><br>
The findings seem a bit harsh considering that the objectives have been
met in principle and now only implementation details need to be fleshed
out. I would therefore propose the following changes:<br><br>
Table Section 3: <br><br>
Nr. 2 Findings: Included in the PPSAI working group report. While details
of the standard report process are still being debated, but there is
consensus that providers must provide full data and be contactable and
responsive. <br><br>
Nr. 3 Findings: Final details of such rocesses are currently being
debated, however the recommendation objective has already been met with
the basis consensus model.<br><br>
Nr. 5 findings: Add: "Already agreed by IRT."<br><br>
Nr. 6 findings: Replace by "Review has shown no such checks are
currently envisioned. Implementing such reviews may violatethe reliance
of the underlying registrants on the privacy of their
data."<br><br>
Nr. 7 findings, first bullet, add: "by mandating data
escrow".<br><br>
<br>
Section 4:<br><br>
Add another new issue: "Current funding proposals for accreditation
program create concerns of ICANN failing the goal of onboarding all
providers of such services due to inflation of costs. ICANN staff seems
to be unable to justify proposed accreditation fees, which may endanger
the entire program." <br><br>
Add further issue: "Impact of GDPR data redaction requirements on
privacy services yet unknown, but significant impact expected as personal
data becomes hidden by default without use of privacy
services."<br><br>
<br><br>
<br><br>
Am 02.04.2018 um 07:48 schrieb Lisa Phifer:<br>
<blockquote type=cite class=cite cite="">Hi Susan and Volker, <br><br>
As promised, attached please find a first cut at a report for the
subgroup on Privacy/Proxy Services. <br><br>
This draft starts with the proposed template and populates the first
three sections by drawing from the subgroup's planning documents, wiki,
and meeting notes. <br><br>
The draft leaves the remaining sections for subgroup members to complete.
Notably, Section 3 starts with the initial findings from your first-pass
planning document - you'll want to insert the rest of your subgroup's
draft findings and assessment of implementation effectiveness into this
section. <br><br>
Finally, you'll want to document any observed issues in Section 4, and
suggest specific measurable steps (if any) the subgroup believes are
important to fill those gaps in Section 5. <br><br>
I hope you'll find this helpful as a starting point. Please review/refine
and then share with your subgroup as appropriate. <br><br>
Regards, Lisa</blockquote><br><br>
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