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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear Alan,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you for your input, please find the revised version attached with tracked changes.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Jean-Baptiste</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca><br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, February 21, 2018 at 5:41 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>Jean-Baptiste Deroulez <jean-baptiste.deroulez@icann.org>, RDS-WHOIS2-Leadership <rds-whois2-rt-leadership_staff@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Ext] Re: [RDS-WHOIS2-RT-Leadership_Staff] RDS-WHOS2-RT Leadership coordination call | 21 February 2018 | 16:30 UTC<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><a name="_MailOriginalBody">Jean-Baptiste, <br>
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Most of the changes to the Blog post are fine, but I do not consider that to be the case for the change to the first bullet of our scope.<br>
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For the review of WHOIS-RT Recs, this omits the first part of the Bylaw requirement and what is in the ToR – to assess to what extent the prior recommendations were implements. The second part of the bylaws was to assess the effectiveness. In our ToR, we softened
that by saying to the degree practical. <br>
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If you want to keep this short and concise, it needs to revert to saying we will evaluate to what extent the recommendations were implemented.
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If a bit longer, add that to the degree possible, we will evaluate whether the recommendation and their implementation were effective.<br>
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For the review of changes since the last review, I should have caught this before, but our ToR does not say we will evaluate the effectiveness of the changes. It says that from the inventory, we will identify a subset that we consider significant and determine
if further steps should be taken to enhance effectiveness.<br>
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Alan<br>
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At 20/02/2018 04:25 PM, Jean-Baptiste Deroulez wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Dear RDS-WHOIS2-RT Leaders,<br>
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In anticipation of our leadership meeting scheduled for tomorrow - 16:30 UTC, please find below a proposed meeting agenda:<br>
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<span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Welcome, roll-call, SoI updates <o:p>
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<span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Outreach Plan: Blog Post <o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Face-to-Face Meeting Agenda <o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">ICANN 62: Face-to-Face Meeting <o:p>
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<span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Plenary Call Agenda <o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">A.O.B. <o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Confirm Decisions Reached And Action Items
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We also wanted to share the revised version of the blog post for your review and discussion on the call, see attached.<br>
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Kind regards,<br>
<br>
Jean-Baptiste<br>
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