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With a few exceptions below, it is fine.<br><br>
- Note the three yellow highlighted sections in the attached copy, and
invert the order in each to mention the WHOIS1 review prior to the new
topics. That then matches the list of detailed topics below and the order
in the report.<br><br>
- The green highlighted are basically duplicates. Do we need both. They
take up a lot of space.<br><br>
- Shouldn't this list (or lists if both are included) include the Bylaws
review item?<br><br>
Alan<br><br>
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At 27/08/2018 02:11 PM, Jean-Baptiste Deroulez wrote:<br>
<blockquote type=cite class=cite cite="">Dear leaders,<br>
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Following up on today’s call and the adoption of the RDS-WHOIS2 draft
report, please find attached the public comment announcement proceeding
for your review. This document, divided in two sections: 1) Announcement
(to appear <a href="https://www.icann.org/news/announcements">here</a>)
2) Public Comment Proceeding Details (to be published under
<a href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments">this page</a>), is
submitted for your review in preparation for the release of the draft
report for public comment.<br>
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Please submit any edits, comments on both sections by <b><u>Wednesday 27
August, 23:59 UTC</u></b>. If none are received, the attached version
will be considered approved.<br>
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Kind regards,<br>
<br>
Jean-Baptiste<br><br>
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