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<p class="MsoPlainText">Dear Alan<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">Saw your message and reviewed the report. Thank you for addressing my previous comments.
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<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">Please find attached the <u>latest version</u>, including one edition for your review.
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<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">Please note that I have inserted the <b>latest version of the fact sheet</b> (through 28 February 2019) which is pending approval from Susan (see previous email sent to leadership list).<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">A few comments on your to-do list:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">- Redo the Table of Contents once everything else is done -
<span style="color:#70AD47">DONE</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">- Please do a final review looking for orphan headings and such. I<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">noticed 3.4.2 but there may be others. - <span style="color:#70AD47">
DONE</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">- We seem to use Finding: and Findings: I suspect they should all be
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">Findings: but perhaps some of them are really singular. I'll leave that to you. -
<span style="color:#70AD47">DONE</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">- The table on page 54/55 needs the title row repeated on the 2nd page. –
<span style="color:#70AD47">DONE (also on other tables for clarity and consisentency)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">- The same for the table in 3.7.2 - <span style="color:#70AD47">
DONE</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">- Is blank page 148 intentional? And 172. (perhaps there to get a<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">heading on the right side) – <span style="color:#70AD47">
Did not see blank pages? </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">- Appendix D needs to be inserted. – <span style="color:#70AD47">
DONE (approval needed from Susan on fact sheets)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">- Appendix F needs to be inserted or pointed to. - <span style="color:#70AD47">
DONE</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">- Stephanie's statement which I hope is forthcoming. – <span style="color:#70AD47">
RECEIVED AND INSERTED<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText">Jean-Baptiste<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">On 3/9/19, 4:19 PM, "RDS-WHOIS2-RT-Leadership_Staff on behalf of Alan Greenberg" <rds-whois2-rt-leadership_staff-bounces@icann.org on behalf of alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> Jean-Baptiste,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> I have:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> 1. Accepted the various changes in v05.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> 2. Fixed the R5.1 implementation paragraph that Jean-Batiste
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<p class="MsoPlainText"> identified as being problematic.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> 3. Removed the paragraph referencing GDPR in the R5.1 rationale which
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<p class="MsoPlainText"> was the sticking point in getting Volker and Stephanie to support it.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> 4. Ran a spelling and grammar check. Most of what it identified were
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<p class="MsoPlainText"> ok, but it did catch some problems and those were fixed.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> 5. Fixed the spelling of InterNIC in a few places.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> To Do:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> - Redo the Table of Contents once everything else is done<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> - Please do a final review looking for orphan headings and such. I
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> noticed 3.4.2 but there may be others.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> - We seem to use Finding: and Findings: I suspect they should all be
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> Findings: but perhaps some of them are really singular. I'll leave that to you.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> - The table on page 54/55 needs the title row repeated on the 2nd page.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> - The same for the table in 3.7.2<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> - Is blank page 148 intentional? And 172. (perhaps there to get a
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<p class="MsoPlainText"> heading on the right side)<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> - Appendix D needs to be inserted.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> - Appendix F needs to be inserted or pointed to.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> - Stephanie's statement which I hope is forthcoming.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"> That's about as much as I could find.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText"> Alan<o:p></o:p></p>
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